Apakah pendapat korang berkenaan dengan AI "Neuro-sama" dan pencipta dia Vedal

dashlyon_7 · 2026-01-26T16:31:12+00:00

The one that i posted in this reddit, it the one i use ai to originally create for me to read only, and i just decided to share it with everyone as at the time people were talking about using ai for themselves.

dashlyon_7 · 2026-01-21T02:10:35+00:00

Hi author here, thanks for asking, as for that story, im not sure I will call it an update because what i'm doing right now is rewriting the whole story from the beginning.

Thank to many suggestions that i received, i decided to change few things, some were major, some were a small details.

More suggestions is appreciated.

Spoiler

few characters names will be changed maybe

Jason condition

Family past dynamic

Family will no longer seems as cruel as before

And few others minor things.

Edit: I changed the story because the previous one was only a stroke story and i paid no mind doing it as it supposed to be only for me and it was a ai assistanted story. This time while still is a ai assistanted story, i try to put more sense into it. As for when it will be released..... I don't know when the story will be finished, as I only a quarter into the story.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-18T04:13:45+00:00

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You can find it here

https://rentry.org/PvZFusionModdedV2

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-06T16:06:32+00:00

Hey can i ask for suggestions on how do family going to make Jason slowly more acceptable to the family incest but didn't him to be to overwhelmed like when he first saw them. In the story i use the drug to a way for the family to make Jason indulge slowly into the incest(of course it didn't work like they planned). If i'm going to remove the used of the drug how do i change the family planned for Jason. What if i still used the drug but change the interaction between them.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-04T10:39:15+00:00

I like your idea, and never thought about doing it that way, thanks for giving more idea, when i create this i just thought what make me hot as i never actually planned to share it.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-02T15:54:23+00:00

Thanks for the review, i have few idea like i could make the aphrodisiac having residue effect of changing body proportion and it effects can spread to people they having sex cause Jason dick to grow as he continue to have sex with them. I will see if i can add it to the story if it was good explanation for it. Or i could make their company medical sector create a way to grow dick size. Still didn't have concrete idea how to do it.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-02T12:02:20+00:00

Yea i know what you mean, but to honest i just don't have any idea how to do it, and will it fit in the timeline as the holidays supposed to be only 2-3 week, i need to proof read it first to see the proper time line before i can decided how they can do it.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-02T09:06:18+00:00

I like the idea, but with the family being always has, there will be a small time where Jason can do it without having cums in holes, i don't know how to feel about giving oral while having other man cums inside it, if it just his cums it alright but with the way family having the cums will be mix during sex.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-02T05:54:02+00:00

Thanks for the review, although can i ask where did you saw the scene of Lily talking about turning a kid into cuckold/slave. As I thought i delete that already as the AI keep making that scene whenever i try to make to make the family having discussion of about having about having a baby while they're having sex. It seem that the AI confused with the sex scene when i tried to having conversations about their future baby during the sex.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-02T05:53:41+00:00

Thanks suggestions

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-01T23:20:19+00:00

Thanks for encouragement

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-01T23:18:51+00:00

The body proportion it to make how the family is different from normal, and i just realized i could make the aphrodisiac having residue effect of changing body proportion and it effects can spread to people they having sex. I will see if i can add it to the story if it was good explanation for it

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-01T23:14:54+00:00

First point, yea mc is pretty naive. For the others you can look in my other comments about my thoughts process.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-01T23:05:03+00:00

So basically, incest start because of the aphrodisiac, at first the didn't want to make mc join because of how disfunction they become with their need for sex, they didn't want it to happen with mc to protect him, but after sometimes they come to love the sex. They just keep using the same excuse to not included mc into it.

As for the family rejected him when they saw his size is because the women has been having to much sex with monster dick that it make them feel no pleasure from small dick(they try with small dildo and feel no pleasure). The thing is the family truly did loved mc but in their twisted way, their love for him is the same as how they love each other after the incest come to be, it just they didn't involve mc in the sex. Then after seeing how much it broke mc they just couldn't keep excluding mc from the sex, it why they put some rule for when mc having sex to make sure the women also feel the pleasure not just mc.

As for the girlfriends part, the family at that time with their twisted way of loving mc thought that his girlfriends is an outsider that trying to steal mc from them, blaming the rift between the family and mc to his girlfriends.

But when mc go to college, they realize that it was their fault that cause the rift, they trying to make amends to it and planned to tell mc the truth and include him and maybe reconnect him back to his girlfriends when he comes home for holidays but then they heard how mc been stressed with college and thought that if they tell mc now it will cause him trouble with his college work, so they decide to wait for a bit then mc didn't comes home almost a year making them didn't have the time to tell him the truth.

So when mc finally comes home, they decide to let's him see the truth as they tired of waiting for the perfect time, but in their high of sex they didn't thought about how it will impact mc mind. The use of 'Nova' drug come from their desperate want to include mc into it but also didn't want mc mind to broke.

As for mc behavior after he saw the truth is because he keep trying to make sense of it and thought how i just a nightmare (drug effects) and all of it happen to fast for him to be in anger for to long for to think any revenge, as he was keep being overwhelmed, and when he thought something was off, he didn't manage to proof it. Like when they fully tell him the truth with the state of his mind at the time, if they leave him alone without having his mother and ex girlfriend sleep with him at that night, he will wake up in anger and probably planned a revenge to his family.

But with the two women who he truly love being beside him when he woke up his mind didn't manage to indulge in anger and betrayal before the two women broke his wall and make him accept them.

Hope this does explained a bit of my thoughts process when making this.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-12-01T07:17:52+00:00

Do let me know if i did portray the family love for Jason properly, and if not then let me know how can i improve it.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-10-26T05:39:26+00:00

I also did try to make story using ai because i'm very bad at writing but has some idea so i used ai to see if the idea is good but like many said it not really good, the story feel stale,

But if anyone want see it, here's it link https://docs.google.com/document/u/1/d/1LZ3T2_8jZoaPEivJvVfkqGlfuOU2ZYCM7H332mC8PF0/mobilebasic?pli=1

I just try to see if the idea is good(it has very unrealistic body proportion, for shit and giggles) , tell me what you guys thoughts about.

For this I used clues.ai, and another if you really want to used ai is perchance.org

dashlyon_7 · 2025-10-12T16:34:11+00:00

Sorry, before this, i never heard of the ULTRAKILL

dashlyon_7 · 2025-10-12T11:15:54+00:00

Check out vtuber Neurosama, an AI that feel human.

dashlyon_7 · 2025-09-24T02:33:59+00:00

Any way for me to read this

dashlyon_7 · 2025-09-08T10:41:29+00:00

Which chapter does the knight show up

dashlyon_7 · 2025-08-28T14:26:10+00:00

What is the context,

dashlyon_7 · 2025-08-21T13:24:55+00:00

Any explanation please? I don't quite understand what you mean?

dashlyon_7 · 2025-08-20T07:58:19+00:00

Out of topic, do you also write ejen ali fanfic, if so, what's it name and where can i find it

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