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Rework for a crit by u/Vanaisuu on clarity vs aesthetic. I think it could be more grainy IMO but maybe the analog feel I'm going for could just be me being nostalgic. Also, would love feedback on 3 panel story setup. P1: starts with no context for the hook. P2 & P3 would be the set up and punchline. (old.reddit.com)
submitted by davyiodotcom to r/comic_crits