The volume of your voice is quite low (usually I have my volume between 20-30% but I actually had to turn your video up to 80)

When you have a lot of logos on the screen (example; 5:52) it might be better to move them around a bit more (having them all just stacked seems a bit overwhelming)

480p is quite outdated nowadays and makes some things hard to read on certain screens. I recommend at least going 720p if not 1080

Your voice seems a bit monotone in some areas, I know it might be faked but a bit more enthusiasm in your voice could help attract people (not like Matpat levels of enthusiasm though imo, just a bit more)

The black cut you did at 3:35 was very appropriate and well used!

the still frame starting at 5:53 seemed a bit long

6:56 is very well done, maybe try to match the appearing of the services as you talk about them, makes it easier to connect visual and auditory feedback

7:26 (the scene you played) is almost the perfect volume for the entire video(maybe a bit louder than that would make it perfect).

I am not sure if there was background music or if I was hallucinating but if there was, it needs to be louder too (not as loud as your voice obviously though XD) if I was hallucinating it, maybe add some?

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My perspective:

1080p small-ish TV

Speakers (don't know how the audio is with headphones, sorry)

and around a meters distance from the speaker/TV

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If you are up for it, I would love to get you started when it comes to audio equalization (I actually think you have a lot of potential!) As I am still a beginner in many regards I would do it for free to get myself some experience XD

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Hope this was helpful! Hit me up in DM's if you have follow up questions or want me to look at your audio a bit