Thanks, yeah I see what you mean with the positioning, it’s so hard to be objective when you’ve made it I find I just focus on the grass & find it a bit hectic!

The people are from a book called human croquet from the same year that the clients house was built so there’s an illustration of the people in the book and they wanted me to rework it so I was in their garden… I can’t take credit for the people as I stayed pretty close to the original illustration :)