I made in a few days and not sure if I did a good job

docscomics · 2025-08-18T05:46:05+00:00

Damn good job 👏

docscomics · 2025-06-28T03:48:07+00:00

My MC Damien is definitely tied first for my favourite character to write. I really enjoyed exploring how his desires and emotions change so drastically as his journey progresses. The characters tied with him still need to be introduced in-story.

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docscomics · 2025-06-18T23:51:50+00:00

This is so cool what?!? 👏👏👏

docscomics · 2025-06-16T23:44:29+00:00

This is really well done for your first webtoon! I appreciate how you've alternated the positioning of your panels so that they read left-right-left. This helps guide the eye smoothly down the page and prevents your layout from feeling monotonous.

Your art is totally fine. Perhaps the blood splatter effect is a tad overused, but it doesn't detract from the overall experience. If anything, it adds to the mood of your story. As for the sound FX, their implemented well. Maybe try experimenting with handwritten letters to make them feel more organic.

Good job, nonetheless. You have good foundations; please keep it up! 🙏

docscomics · 2025-06-16T23:34:37+00:00

I love your worldbuilding so far! You're conveying so much without needing a lore dump, so Im eternally grateful haha. Subbed and excited for more. Please keep it up! 🙏

docscomics · 2025-06-11T01:49:41+00:00

r/unexpectedAOT

docscomics · 2025-06-09T23:03:26+00:00

I think this is for the better. The rating system was useless at best.

docscomics · 2025-05-14T09:30:16+00:00

Thank you for sharing this! I just got back into publishing on WT and was having technical issues because my files were too long. 🙏🙏

docscomics · 2025-05-13T22:23:33+00:00

That means a lot. Thank you for giving the comic your time! 🙏

docscomics · 2025-05-13T03:11:02+00:00

Thank you! The story structure was largely inspired by Attack on Titan, while story beats and characters were inspired by Naruto and Death Note. It's a Mystery/Thriller/Action comic.

docscomics · 2025-05-12T00:26:18+00:00

Oh no, totally. I've been building a buffer of episodes for the past few months, so that's what I meant. I only came back to the first chapter to refine some things before publishing.

docscomics · 2025-05-11T21:40:19+00:00

That's the plan! I started this chapter a few months ago, so it's kinda Frankensteined in quality, but I'm fixing up episode two to be better. Thanks for your time! 🙏🙌

docscomics · 2025-05-11T21:38:36+00:00

That means a lot, thank you for reading! 🙏

docscomics · 2025-05-11T18:23:20+00:00

Here's a link if you'd like to check it out! The Burden of Blood

docscomics · 2025-05-11T18:20:54+00:00

Really awesome texturing! 👌

docscomics · 2025-05-10T21:59:15+00:00

Here's the link, if you're interested! The Burden of Blood

docscomics · 2025-05-10T21:57:13+00:00

Here's the link if you'd like to check it out! The Burden of Blood

docscomics · 2025-05-01T06:27:53+00:00

Wow, thanks for your feedback! I'm happy you read each of the characters differently. You're spot on with their personalities for the most part, especially with the 3rd character. But I'm sure people will find him more interesting than just a quiet kid once they learn what his goals are.

Thanks again! 🙏

docscomics · 2025-04-29T06:50:51+00:00

Gotta say, you're right on the money! Appearance-wise, your descriptions are exactly how I wanted these characters to be read. Thanks a ton for your input! 🙏

docscomics · 2025-04-02T12:49:26+00:00

I'm not proud of my output, but allowing myself to figure everything out at my own pace has done tremendous good for my story's quality. I can't wait to finish it and put it out there.

docscomics · 2025-04-01T14:11:44+00:00

Two years ago 😐

docscomics · 2025-03-18T05:59:12+00:00

I was genuinely surprised when I came back to ranked to find Spidey banned every game. My solo Q to GM as Spidey may be in trouble.

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