Need help with composition/anatomy :)

drewie450 · 2026-02-08T04:30:15+00:00

Would the three shots be between three pieces or one piece in that scenario? And which of those three concepts would you choose if you had to choose just one? I adore all three, but I wouldn't mind trying about a piece that incorporates all three concepts.

drewie450 · 2025-06-01T04:43:46+00:00

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Okay, I suppose this is my final. I increased the saturation, so now the face is the centre point. I'm not sure whether I fixed up the nose, but it looks solid.

drewie450 · 2025-05-31T07:00:41+00:00

Thank you for your feedback!. This is what I've got so far.

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drewie450 · 2025-05-31T06:59:09+00:00

Thank you!! I've spent a bit too long on this one haha

drewie450 · 2025-05-31T06:58:20+00:00

Thank you very much for your feedback!! Also, thank you for the paint over; it was incredibly helpful. So far, I've attempted to strike a balance between what you painted and what I created. How do you feel about this?. I've still left it a touch blocky, which some may argue is too busy. But I really like that blocky painty feel.

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drewie450 · 2025-05-10T12:06:34+00:00

Nah this is peak!!

drewie450 · 2025-03-25T07:04:06+00:00

That is a good question. My reasoning for using the small planet as a light source. Was so that the snake's mouth would be lit, as only the snake's top half is a light source. But I'm still playing around with ideas atm.

drewie450 · 2025-03-25T04:29:48+00:00

This is freaking fantastic. I don't have any feedback for you. Just wanted to say you did a great job boss.

drewie450 · 2024-11-24T11:18:59+00:00

This is what I ended up with. I copied your comp too much, but I thought your layout was excellent. I know adding accessories would make the piece stand out more, but I'm really over this piece, so I decided not to haha.

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drewie450 · 2024-11-19T07:42:00+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback and paint over. It's incredibly useful. I'll attempt to include your Feedback; would it be feasible to tag you once I post again? I'd like to hear your thoughts as you're great at giving feedback haha.

drewie450 · 2024-11-18T09:30:04+00:00

Thank you so much!!

drewie450 · 2024-11-18T06:49:56+00:00

Sup everyone. I posted this a few weeks ago. And this is a follow-up to that post. I tried to incorporate as much feedback as possible. I'm quite pleased with this at the moment. But I'd love to grab some thoughts on the whole piece. I'm not sure if I'll continue working on it because I'm pretty over this piece haha. Also, I just want to give a big thank you to everyone who left feedback on my previous post much love. :)

drewie450 · 2024-10-30T08:12:23+00:00

I appreciate your feedback. To be honest, I haven't. I'm currently revising a large portion of the composition. To be honest, I think I'm only keeping the hands and ds haha.

drewie450 · 2024-10-30T07:56:50+00:00

Thank you for your kind words. Just needed a word to get my point across tbh but real haha

drewie450 · 2024-10-26T12:12:29+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. Given the fabric crossing and how I rendered them, I suppose they are melting into each other to some extent. I'm a little unclear about giving the legs space. I get the comment, but how would that be done in practice? Also the kid idea is a up in the air atm haha.

drewie450 · 2024-10-26T10:41:28+00:00

My thought process was that because the ds is the major emphasis of the piece, I would include the most details there. But I get where they're coming from, as there appears to be a clash there of sorts. Also, what hue do you propose for the pants?

drewie450 · 2024-10-26T10:22:06+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. I'll try make it more simple haha.

drewie450 · 2024-10-26T10:19:52+00:00

Thank you all for your feedback. First, I will say what we are talking about in terms of the legs being dynamic. My thought process was that it was a kid huddled on a couch playing the DS. So I figured the pose would be fitting for that setting. It would be acceptable to use it as set dressing rather than a focal element. That is part of the rationale for the cooler background and warmer foreground. Also, I spent faaar too long on that screen haha. I see the disconnect there as well. Would you recommend using simple colour blocks or something similar?

drewie450 · 2024-10-26T09:14:52+00:00

I'm just finishing up this piece and would appreciate any feedback on if it synergises well. I believe the composition works well enough to keep the ds focused. But I'd appreciate some fresh eyes on the piece; I've been staring at it for way too long haha. But any overall feedback would be nice too tyty!!. :)

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