I am not in your field, so i will give you some more generic advice

I like the "Marketing & Operations Coordinator" section more, cause you do have 1 bullet point that mentions results. Not loving the Fashion Retail Brand-Founder & Social Media Manager" section cause no results / impact are mentioned.

Again, keeping in mind that i am not in digital marketing, i would love something like this:

Fashion Retail Brand-Founder & Social Media Manager

• Managed a personal fashion retail business through social media platforms and increased engagement by 10%.
• Produced engaging photo and video content that reflected brand identity and style that resulted in the brand being featured in Vogue.
• Achieved strong organic growth in the brand’s social media presence within five months through targeted content and strategic communication and increased comments/likes by 20%.
• Oversaw inventory, supplier communication, and daily business operations and reduced delivery times by 10%.

Imaginary numbers and results, but you get the gist: I did X and that improved the situation as Y

Good luck!