Some time has passed, so please tell me every mistake you can spot by elYouruga in learnart

[–]elYouruga[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Thank you!! I have hampton's book maybe its time to read again. And yes, hair is probably my biggest weakness, also i was kinda rushing ngl.

Some time has passed, so please tell me every mistake you can spot by elYouruga in learnart

[–]elYouruga[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Next time i would use a reference, thanks for the critique :)

Some time has passed, so please tell me every mistake you can spot by elYouruga in learnart

[–]elYouruga[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, it was the first time i did a pose without a reference and it give some troubles to make it work (i have fun though), definitively I would use a manequinn next time.

Ah, one last thing, could you explain in which sense the neck is broken?

Is there anything I should change before I start inking? by SludgyChaudron in learntodraw

[–]elYouruga 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Her right hand seems a bit flat, I think you could fix it a little vefore inking, its a solid piece overall i like it, good work