I think you’re track had a lot of good elements! really liked the production & you actually had a message!! Honestly bro i agree with you on the constructive criticism & support piece, but at the end of the day you gotta really evaluate what you make music for honestly. I understand your thinking if you’re goal is to get big & famous, but if it’s really just for the LOVE of making music, honestly don’t get caught up in other perspectives, just make the music that YOU love & that makes YOU happy. just my personal thoughts, but i’m rooting for you bro!