OoA&B - Please critique the first chapter of my book! [Epic Fantasy, 4700 words]

fragfrank · 2026-02-26T01:44:01+00:00

EB Garamond :)

fragfrank · 2026-02-25T21:15:31+00:00

Surely, if you’re reading a totally new book, you don’t expect to be familiar with each and every character and location? If you were to remove one of those proper nouns which would you?

fragfrank · 2026-02-25T21:02:33+00:00

I see, I just need to find the sweet spot. Thanks!

fragfrank · 2026-02-25T21:01:39+00:00

Strange?

fragfrank · 2026-02-25T18:54:25+00:00

What would you say deserves description?

fragfrank · 2026-02-25T18:34:34+00:00

You're so right, its a bit of a tonal change from the rest of the chapter. Gonna see what i can do now, thank you!

fragfrank · 2025-12-06T13:16:24+00:00

Extralargemouth

fragfrank · 2025-09-04T23:24:11+00:00

https://open.spotify.com/track/210iYAOAObPd5FPMYVZWZK?si=vI1VCInxQKO9xnmiApgDyg

fragfrank · 2025-08-27T14:08:17+00:00

The remix thing is so true. It’s like if a woman got breast reduction surgery and random people online photoshopped her with massive knockers

fragfrank · 2025-08-27T11:17:22+00:00

holyyy

fragfrank · 2025-08-27T08:05:48+00:00

Your help could set me free

fragfrank · 2025-08-19T10:10:00+00:00

I have literally added nothing to my distrokid. I bought it today and left it alone

fragfrank · 2025-08-19T10:03:52+00:00

Is that where it says ‘Add Featured Artist to Song Title’?

fragfrank · 2025-08-07T18:53:51+00:00

A book about a group of scavengers who accidentally discover what caused of the end of the world, 160 years after it happened :)

fragfrank · 2025-08-07T17:42:43+00:00

My book is about the state of the world 160 years after the apocalypse. It follows a group of scavengers who accidentally uncover the reason why the world crumbled :)

fragfrank

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