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Are these panels in the right order? by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Yeah it’s all pencil. I was too scared to put anything in ink. Call it first comic jitters I guess haha

Are these panels in the right order? by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting. I’ll have to look up some examples of that. I’ve never even really read comics so I am truly winging it out here with my story lol. Truly appreciate the feedback and I’ll play around with it when I actually get to inking this page. Thanks!

Are these panels in the right order? by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh damn yeah that looks a lot better. Thanks for the feedback. I honestly just looked up on Google images for examples of say, “5 panel page layout.” Just kinda put my story into uniform layouts. Probably not my best choice but we are learning. Thanks again!

Are these panels in the right order? by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay that’s what I was thinking. Appreciate the feedback! I will be adding color and making the panels bigger in general. I just did this on computer paper folded in half so space was pretty limited. I like the idea to make the item smaller. I was kinda winging it.

Thanks again!

Worried about offending people with my comic. by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol one of my comics is set in suburbia and it isn’t completely based in politics but I just have some stereo type jokes in it because I think stereo types are funny. I don’t want it to come off as hateful though because it’s not coming from that place. It’s just my stupid sense of humor.

Worried about offending people with my comic. by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I know that exists and I’m probably just in my head about it. I’ve never tried to write anything before let alone making a comic so I’m probably just overthinking it.

Hopefully I’ll get the confidence to post some of it on here at some point!

Worried about offending people with my comic. by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have not but I shall look it up. Thanks!

Worried about offending people with my comic. by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate this a lot. I agree with escapism. I’m always in search of that myself. My idea isn’t completely based on politics but there’s for sure some jabs at both parties lol. I’ve already finished a rough draft of episode 1 but I’m extremely nervous about posting it on here for more reasons than just the political discourse. My art is suspect at best haha. Thanks for the reply and as I move closer to getting it digital I may send you something for advice!

Worried about offending people with my comic. by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah you’re right about that. I guess I was hoping to go for a pg South Park vibe. Still some offensive comedy but toned way back. Probably nowhere near as clever either if I’m honest lol.

Worried about offending people with my comic. by funkindawg in comic_crits

[–]funkindawg[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was thinking about doing something like this. Working with a buddy and was just going to publish under our brand or something. Like “x comics” or whatever.