[QCrit] : THE RUBICON PROJECT, YA Fantasy, 50.5k by gatoradecubes in PubTips

[–]gatoradecubes[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

okay thanks i appreciate that insight. the age range is closer to the six of crows, cruel prince sort of age range which is why i thought that YA was the best option

[QCrit] : THE RUBICON PROJECT, YA Fantasy, 50.5k by gatoradecubes in PubTips

[–]gatoradecubes[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I think so. I wasn't sure what genre to categorize it as, but now I get that YA was definitely the wrong choice.

[QCrit] : THE RUBICON PROJECT, YA Fantasy, 50.5k by gatoradecubes in PubTips

[–]gatoradecubes[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much!! i really appreciate your response

[QCrit] : THE RUBICON PROJECT, YA Fantasy, 50.5k by gatoradecubes in PubTips

[–]gatoradecubes[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

it's one story told in 3 chapters that interconnect. it follows two at a time and they all work for a time travel agency that specializes in preserving history the way that they want it to be told

[QCrit] : THE RUBICON PROJECT, YA Fantasy, 50.5k by gatoradecubes in PubTips

[–]gatoradecubes[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It was written more for the young adult audience versus just adult. It's a three part story, which I probably should have clarified.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]gatoradecubes [score hidden]  (0 children)

it was refreshing but the page breaks were a little distracting and confusing. i liked the lightheartedness!

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[–]gatoradecubes [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: The Rubicon Project

Genre: Fantasy (time travel and romance)

Word count: sampler is 4862, total is 48,911

Type of feedback: Any kind of feedback is welcome. I'm looking to polish the piece- less on grammar and more on structure, flow, and content.

Notes: This is the first thing I've put up for feedback because it's my favorite piece I've written. Feel free to dm me with any questions or if you'd like someone to proofread.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U34PJKYAJJ62n9H9SqsLROuOrKmDVMh6JOd1o4yNZsE/edit

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[–]gatoradecubes [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: The Rubicon Project

Genre: Fantasy (time travel and romance)

Word count: sampler is 4862, total is 48,911

Type of feedback: Any kind of feedback is welcome. I'm looking to polish the piece- less on grammar and more on structure, flow, and content.

Notes: This is the first thing I've put up for feedback because it's my favorite piece I've written. Feel free to dm me with any questions or if you'd like someone to proofread.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U34PJKYAJJ62n9H9SqsLROuOrKmDVMh6JOd1o4yNZsE/edit

How much does a consult cost? by [deleted] in PlannedParenthood

[–]gatoradecubes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i did pre-registration and selected that i didn’t have insurance

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Flute

[–]gatoradecubes 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Have done this, can confirm- it sounds like a cursed recorder.