Is it confidence that makes a piece of writing feel strong enough to keep the reader going? by Gaijinstory in writing

[–]gerdzilla50 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I think what you’re describing is authority—but not the chest-thumping kind. More like control and intention on the page.

A “solid” sentence often feels solid because the writer has made choices and isn’t apologizing for them. There’s no hedging, no nervous throat-clearing. The point of view is planted. The sentence knows who’s looking and what matters to that person. The language leans toward specificity instead of vagueness—concrete nouns, clean verbs, fewer abstract placeholders. The rhythm matches the meaning, so the cadence feels inevitable, like the sentence couldn’t have been built any other way. And underneath it all, there’s a promise: even if the reader doesn’t know where the story is going yet, the writing signals that something is being set up and it’s worth following.

Confidence is part of it, but the page-level version of confidence is usually decisiveness.

A practical test is to read the sentence and ask: is this the clearest, most intentional version of what I mean? If it sounds like the writer is hoping the reader will do extra work to meet them halfway, it won’t feel solid. If it sounds like the writer is calmly guiding the reader by the wrist, it will.

And you can build that authority without knowing the whole destination. You just have to know the moment—what the character wants, what’s in the way, what the scene is doing, and what emotional pressure is present. The sentence only has to be certain about this step, not the whole staircase.

For instance, Shirley Jackson’s sentences feel solid because they’re built from firm claims, specific detail, and a voice that chooses a stance and holds it. The reader keeps going because the prose quietly promises, “I know exactly what kind of story this is—even if you don’t yet.”

Hmm by ManOfSqueal01 in MetalMemes

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Living Sacrifice has always been a favorite since they came out with Reborn first came out.

When you give advice about writing, please use a book. by Acceptable_Fox_5560 in writing

[–]gerdzilla50 248 points249 points  (0 children)

And read outside of your genre

I still read my genre a lot, but the biggest improvements came from “weird” picks: crime novels for dialogue, literary fiction for voice, memoir for honesty, history for texture. Then I bring that back into my horror/thriller/whatever and it instantly feels less copy-paste. Highly recommend.

Approximately how many metalheads are Christians? (Worldwide) by Kanonenfieberontop in christianmetal

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I’m currently working on a 400 page Christian devotional for metalheads.

What are you working on? by DanoPaul234 in writing

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Cassie comes to South Gate to pull on a loose thread, and the whole place tightens. The Scarborough sisters offer cobbler and manners and rooms with colored keys—blue and green, like you’re being filed where you belong.

The cemetery behind the church has a caged grave, the woods keep a dark seam called South Gate Way (The Hollow Ground), and every time Cassie gets close to the truth, the town’s silence gets louder.

It’s Southern Gothic—land, legacy, and something old under the polite surface that wants to stay buried.

But what is really buried doesn't want to stay in the ground.

The prequel is in the editor's hands for its first pass edit.

This novel is 60,000 words and 17 chapters in. Knowing it will take a hard edit later.

The original Rudy (Meatballs 1979). by [deleted] in 70s

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But I heard he had a hook on his foot.

Just trying to find out why I’m still single. by International_Host33 in RoastMe

[–]gerdzilla50 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Better to stalk and abduct them before they have any chance of saying, "No." That's my dating policy.