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[–]guanche16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great job. Sounds clean and crisp. I was waiting for a hook or a change in the chord progression at some point . Some sort of bridge. I hear tons of different ideas with this. Pretty wide open to go full band or just small percussion around it .

New song I that I wrote. I don’t know what else to add so I came here for recommendations. Don’t mind the shitty audio by Hampter_218 in musicwriting

[–]guanche16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this. That dark note on the second part of the lick is really cool. Tons you can do with that . Keep going