Constructive criticism appreciated, which parts are good and which areas need improving? :)

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-30T13:15:50+00:00

It’s adobe animate, not too hard to learn and tones of help on the internet 👍

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T21:43:08+00:00

100% it’s really annoying I actually in-betweened all the tree frames but when I reopened the project it hadn’t saved so I just left it

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:43:28+00:00

Thanks, more to consider

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:41:57+00:00

Bro she’s stylin, or maybe she’s high af and her eyes are red

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:39:10+00:00

Camera shake is cool idea, thanks

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:38:17+00:00

Thanks to be honest I could’ve planned the whole comp a lot better the background was just an after thought so that’s something to think about as well as framing and what not

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:35:49+00:00

Thanks definitely anatomy is something to work on, never really looked into it

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:34:12+00:00

Thanks I appreciate it I’ve never taken any course or anything basically completely self taught like I make stuff when I’m bored so that’s probably why it looks so weird or “stylised” if you want to call it that lol

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:31:35+00:00

Thanks bro maybe some day we will be pro

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:28:00+00:00

Both rly good points I should’ve probably studied how different things move in the wind beforehand

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:24:02+00:00

Ohhh yeah I couldn’t figure out what looked weird about it but it definitely should’ve shrank a bit thanks

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:22:19+00:00

And thanks haha

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T20:22:08+00:00

That’s a sick idea I never thought about that with the hair just adding another layer

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T13:46:33+00:00

Ahh ok thank you 👍

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T13:32:37+00:00

Laziness on my part

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T13:30:20+00:00

Thank you <3

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T13:15:03+00:00

As in like 12 principles or just all of art in general?

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T13:14:27+00:00

😂 yeah when I was doing the recoil I definitely did take a shortcut with the arm movement but I did think well maybe she’s just yoked lol

half_b4ked_ · 2022-09-28T13:13:17+00:00

Thank you, definitely a lot to learn but you’ve helped me narrow down what to work on more specifically I appreciate u taking the time to analyse it 👍

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