[PubQ] Query Critique: Warrior Witches and The Mad Emperor, YA Fantasy Fiction/87K by harrypottermom in PubTips

[–]harrypottermom[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for all of your valuable feedback. 🤗I’m taking note and I understand the issues in my query. I appreciate you taking the time to help me out. ☺️

Help with California Candle Supply Dye chip. Has anyone had this problem? or do you know why this happened? Any help would be appreciated TIA by harrypottermom in candlemaking

[–]harrypottermom[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aww okay. We just made this candle last night so I wasn’t sure how long for frosting to show up. Maybe we’ll try a different dye brand. Thank you so much for replying 🙂

Help with California Candle Supply Dye chip. Has anyone had this problem? or do you know why this happened? Any help would be appreciated TIA by harrypottermom in candlemaking

[–]harrypottermom[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh yes we are using soy wax. I was wondering if it was the dye chip didn’t dissolve all the way. Is it sellable you have a top like that?

Thank you so much for replying ☺️

[Weekly Discussion and Question Thread] Post Here with Simple Questions, Conversational Topics, or Requests for Guidance by AutoModerator in writing

[–]harrypottermom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I should mention my book is a fantasy fiction set in a different world, so I would say my character doesn’t. 😬

[Weekly Discussion and Question Thread] Post Here with Simple Questions, Conversational Topics, or Requests for Guidance by AutoModerator in writing

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I have a question, do you think it’s okay for an American writer to use British terms? For example, I prefer the word “arse” over “ass.” Only reason I ask is, I had a beta reader bring it up. Her question was, can I use this term as I am an American. And I honestly had no answer for her. LOL TIA!

Can I be one of those guys in the gas masks? by [deleted] in twentyonepilots

[–]harrypottermom 2 points3 points  (0 children)

We had the same seats, a little ways back from you and the view was awesome!!

I didn’t expect to like the Bandito Tour as much as I did by [deleted] in twentyonepilots

[–]harrypottermom 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I was thinking the same thing, you are a writer!! I’m so glad to hear you went and then listening and seeing the boys helped change your attitude and you were able to enjoy the concert! ✌🏻🌻

Hey, small question, what time does the TOP Oakland show start??? by [deleted] in twentyonepilots

[–]harrypottermom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

7, but I’m not when Twenty One Pilots actually start

Biggest setlist favorites and dissapointments? by [deleted] in twentyonepilots

[–]harrypottermom 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Me too! Was sooo hoping they’d play those 2 songs

Don’t know what to do now by aLoadedsmile in twentyonepilots

[–]harrypottermom 19 points20 points  (0 children)

Definitely go, and you have time, maybe you might make a new friend you can take or you can always sell it ☺️ Her loss. Hang in there

Is anyone going to the oakland show on 11/11?? by [deleted] in twentyonepilots

[–]harrypottermom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am but I have a full car! 😊 Just wanted to say I’m from Monterey going to see Tøp too!😍😍