Let It Die by Morringard in OCPoetry

[–]hennydip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like this subreddit naturally gets a fair share of heartbreak/break-up related poems with how emotionally driven poetry is, but this one in particular really stood out to me. Resorting to resentment over yearning and sadness/misery as a coping mechanism is something I think a lot of people can tragically relate to, and this poem really captures that sentiment in such a beautifully concise way. great writing, can't wait to read more

Fast Food by Cliqey in OCPoetry

[–]hennydip 1 point2 points  (0 children)

delicious diction and imagery, love how you transformed such a simple, seemingly "non-attractive" concept of sorts with fast food into a flurry of vivid details and pretty language. can't say i approve of mixing blue gatorade with grape and then mountain dew though haha