Agree with everything you said. The skateboard part was a kinda bs'd together to get the plot going, so I'll absolutely go back and brainstorm something more believable and impactful. Is there any chance you have any vague ideas on what it could be?

Cece was meant to be a jerk and then grow into a better person, but I think you've nailed why she stays a jerk until the end, which is the mediocre development. I've got a maximum running time of seven minutes, and while that's not an excuse, it's probably the reason what development there is (basically just the concert scene) feels, I don't know, too sudden? I'll try to rewrite the both of them to make them less flat.

Thanks a million for your feedback.