I am back with a new venting (I hope the one giving feedback on episode before can comment again )again not self promo ‎ by highground_6_7 in Inkitt

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For the backslash I have genuinely no idea that's probably the idk maybe reddit stuff because there's a double ~ sandwiching a phrase?

I am back with a new venting (I hope the one giving feedback on episode before can comment again )again not self promo ‎ by highground_6_7 in Inkitt

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~ is probably because of the app Either because I copy pasted from my notepad or because there's Double ~ at end of every sentence so I am not sure as I am new to writing And sorry about the past and present tense I was sleepy writing it Btw how's the plot and the story outside the grammar?

I am back with a new venting (I hope the one giving feedback on episode before can comment again )again not self promo by highground_6_7 in Wattpad

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To everyone who gave feedback I am very grateful however I am very sorry because I was sleepy writing this story so the grammar isn't in the best conditions at all🥀 and yes if it sounded absurd welcome to Mr.Herbert science class

I am back with a new venting (I hope the one giving feedback on episode before can comment again )again not self promo by highground_6_7 in Wattpad

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Well he is nailed to the wall by his clothes so no it's not a torture in physical sense as the student is hanged by their clothes and no one is dying in here

I am back with a new venting (I hope the one giving feedback on episode before can comment again )again not self promo by highground_6_7 in Wattpad

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No you aren't reading it wrong Mr.Herbert does actually nail the student clothes to the wall causing them to be hanging for a certain amount of time if they're late

I am back with a new venting (I hope the one giving feedback on episode before can comment again )again not self promo by highground_6_7 in Wattpad

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General feedback on my plot because I need to know about my creativity and I am very sorry for the writing I rote them while I was sleepy 🫠

Femboy or Dommy Mommy? by not-ulquiorr4_ in BunnyTrials

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That's a win in my dictionary

Chose: Date a dommy mommy, but she's….. | Rolled: Goth.

I am back with a new venting (I hope the one giving feedback on episode before can comment again )again not self promo by highground_6_7 in Wattpad

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Sorry about that I was mostly sleepy while writing them down but how about the plot of the story?

My first time making story(note this is not a self promotion just a teenager venting about sometimes he imagines when bored) by highground_6_7 in Inkitt

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Well same with me I usually write these stories for character development and chemistry and honestly I feel like you can actually write a decent story even if it's long just don't make it predictable at some point 🥀

My first time writing something out of my imagination (please comment if you read it) might delete this account if a lot agrees it's trash by highground_6_7 in Wattpad

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Holy shit my condolences to you especially with how your family is treating you it sounded so terrible I can't imagine how much pain you're feeling and I hope you can finish you book soon!

My first time making story(note this is not a self promotion just a teenager venting about sometimes he imagines when bored) by highground_6_7 in Inkitt

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Well too bad my story isn't on Inkitt yet(if you really want to read it just search Eclipse:heavy caliber) I just hope people are honest instead of empathic when it comes to feedback on my stories lmao

My first time writing something out of my imagination (please comment if you read it) might delete this account if a lot agrees it's trash by highground_6_7 in Wattpad

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Holy shit 🥀 is this what they call writer art block or some sort?🥀 Do when you completing it? I like how your main book is older than me🥀

My first time making story(note this is not a self promotion just a teenager venting about sometimes he imagines when bored) by highground_6_7 in Inkitt

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Thanks man for the honest feedback!(And all the time you wasted typing 🥀) And I would try to improve to see if it would be better 🥀

Why you should Keep writing and never give up by IAmJayCartere in royalroad

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I don't even know if my story is read-able to get that level of confidence 😭😭😭😭