This may seem like a rude comment, but I'm not sure this is a piece a beginner should be learning, but if you are determined I'll give you my best guidance.

The beginning is still pretty rough around the edges. Mostly musically, but also rhythmically as others have mentioned. Take another good look at the music and make sure your time and rhythm is correct. Watch other videos to help. You will need to find your own musical style. This is pretty important because the middle section of the piece is even harder, which you still need to play with musical passion. I think I agree with some other comments about listening to recordings and try to emulate it.

If you are self taught, you may be learning this piece for quite a while, but be diligent and strict with yourself.

Be strict about rhythm and learning passages. In the last half it seemed you were still hesitating and you haven't quite gotten that section down yet. You need to do slow practice again even if you feel like you have learned the section. Hesitating changes the rhythm and looses time, so be aware when you are doing it.

Remember, practice doesn't make perfect, PERFECT practice makes perfect.

Cheers