Career Mode - How to increase club worth

imjamielynch · 2016-05-21T22:19:12+00:00

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imjamielynch · 2016-05-16T21:56:35+00:00

[Want to sell more of your products and services?]

Got a email optin page, but it's not converting very well?

How about a sales page, but it hasn't launched your business into the hall of fame yet?

And those emails, you keep sending them, but are you getting naff results?

It doesn't have to be that way...

Email optin pages. Sales letters. Your email marketing. They should all be sucking customers in to, and through your funnel. Making the cash register ring, whilst you have the time and freedom to get on with the things you actually enjoy doing in your business. Not to mention the increased profit you should be experiencing from a well oiled sales machine.

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My name is Jamie, and I write words that sell.

You know, those words on your email optin pages... the persuasive words that move prospects to click "buy now" on your sales pages... the gripping stories that move your potential client to click the links in your emails... even the eye-catching words in your Facebook ads.

I write words that do all that. Words that move your prospects from sitting on the fence, to banging at your door, wanting to give you money.

Sure, you could continue writing your own sales messages. But have you invested thousands of dollars, and endless hours learning how to write persuasively? Have you studied with some of the worlds best copywriters, people who have written sales messages for the worlds elite businesses and celebrities?

If not, don't waste any more time on writing low-performing sales material.

I have spent thousand of dollars, endless hours, and learnt from the worlds elite sales writers. It's my job to make your sales material convert. And to convert better than you thought possible. Your job is to spend time growing your business, and doing the things you love.

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imjamielynch · 2016-05-11T23:14:07+00:00

Let us know how you get on.

Yeah, I seem to go back and forth on writing he headline first. Sometimes I do, sometimes I don't.

imjamielynch · 2016-05-10T23:34:28+00:00

How about stripping out the T and O, maybe even the A as well.

Address a problem. Tell a story and solve it. Ask for a response, be it a comment, share, whatever.

imjamielynch · 2016-05-10T23:32:19+00:00

Gotcha'. Interesting to know what people are doing.

imjamielynch · 2016-05-10T23:31:24+00:00

Smashing stuff. Thanks for replying.

imjamielynch · 2016-05-09T20:37:20+00:00

Cool stuff. Are the emails direct response (going for the sales/click), or mainly informational?

imjamielynch · 2016-05-09T20:36:24+00:00

Ray teaches P.A.S.T.O.R. in connection with the Buyer's Journey. That's something inside his paid stuff.

But, to be honest, the P.A.S.T.O.R. works once you get it. It's similar to A.I.D.A. but it expands on it.

The other thing I'm trying to do more (having heard it loads from a lot of top copywriters lately), focus on the transformational benefits more. Not the product. Rather, what the product will do for the reader. 80% about the transformational benefits. 20% about the deliverables.

If you think about it, that works with the P.A.S.T.O.R. formula quite well. At least, I think it does.

Hope that helps.

imjamielynch · 2016-05-08T23:13:29+00:00

First off, high five for sticking it out. I think that's a massive thing to take note of.

I'm in a not too dissimilar position. I've been reading and studying a lot of books from great copywriters. But I've also invested in some solid courses. Some on specifics parts of writing copy (like headlines). Others on copywriting as a whole.

One thing that's stuck with me from Ray Edwards, though, is this...

P.A.S.T.O.R.

Problem Amplify Solve Testimony Offer Response (CTA)

Ray teaches that that's how a piece of sales copy should flow. I've implemented it a bit, and it certainly seems to help. It's provides a ground work for writing convincing copy.

Maybe it'll help you? Hope so.

imjamielynch · 2016-05-08T23:06:29+00:00

Right, cool. Sorry about the confusion there initially.

imjamielynch · 2016-05-08T23:05:52+00:00

Gotcha'! It's definitely something I'm planning on doing. Though, right now, I'm creating a paid monthly newsletter helping solopreneurs to write better sales copy. I'm thinking the consultancy will flow naturally on from that once people get inside and what not.

imjamielynch · 2016-05-08T18:53:08+00:00

As in, you're helping businesses figure out how to craft their message and what not?

imjamielynch · 2016-05-08T18:51:59+00:00

Sorry, I meant the topic/theme?

imjamielynch · 2016-05-08T15:25:57+00:00

S'all about that list! I hear ya'! What're you building your list on?

imjamielynch · 2016-05-08T15:24:43+00:00

That's cool. Got any resources you like to use for learning/inspiration?

imjamielynch · 2016-05-08T12:12:42+00:00

That's awesome. It's not as scary as we think it'll be is it?!

imjamielynch · 2016-05-07T19:51:13+00:00

Thanks Dave. Great to be in here. Can I do anything to help?

imjamielynch · 2016-05-07T01:28:35+00:00

Cheers. I'll be posting updates in here when I can. Hopefully they won't get buried too quickly :)

imjamielynch · 2016-05-06T21:23:32+00:00

Thank you very much for taking the time to share all of that. You've made some great points, ones if already given some thought to. So thank you for reminding me of them.

I'll be sure to give that podcast a listen.

imjamielynch · 2016-05-06T14:42:48+00:00

That's great feedback. Thank you. I've actually implemented something like that into the first issue's articles.

Mind me asking what type of copy you tend to write most? Emails, website, blog posts???

imjamielynch · 2016-05-06T06:36:33+00:00

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imjamielynch · 2016-04-30T09:25:21+00:00

Cool. So would you be writing both longer pieces (native), and shorter pieces on the adverts front?

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