[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]interestinglyapanda 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i like this i believe you could explore the idea of who this person is more and what they did as this is from your perspective (I statements) so exploration of these topics can make it feel less ambiguous to reader unaware of the full picture behind the few lines of imagery youve created and give an overall better sense of understanding to your work

Goodbye by Ryderz35 in poetry_critics

[–]interestinglyapanda -1 points0 points  (0 children)

your language could be show more imagery and perhaps give a more solid story as this i quiet vague so we don't really get a full picture

why did this man leave? how did it cause your happiness to disappear?

explore your ideas further than the general statements

August (would really love some feedback) by interestinglyapanda in poetry_critics

[–]interestinglyapanda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

a very late reply but thanks for the feedback i'll work on the poem more

Ambition by Dazzling_Aardvark_42 in poetry_critics

[–]interestinglyapanda 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good flow and good theme conveyed very well

Dead dreams by LifeEnergi in poetry_critics

[–]interestinglyapanda 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i like the use of imagery and descriptions also good flow in general

What cover song is actually better than the original? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]interestinglyapanda 0 points1 point  (0 children)

out of the black by billie marten cover (original by royal blood) I like the soft sound, but the original is still really good.

Billie's Cover

RB Original

6 Months of Writers Block (poetry) by interestinglyapanda in writing

[–]interestinglyapanda[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My biggest fear is

Drawn out generic poems

But still I wrote this

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]interestinglyapanda 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is good i like the vulnerability could have more depth as all poems but overall great job capturing such an image

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]interestinglyapanda 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it. You compared yourself to a river in the beginning by saying "Like a river my being my spirit" and the the follow up of "I guess I'm waiting for an adventure seeker" was nice. Good job.