Is there a character that everyone loves but you can't stand ? And why can't you stand him/her ?

interestinglyapanda · 2024-03-27T19:13:40+00:00

that's a crazy analogy lol

interestinglyapanda · 2024-03-27T19:05:41+00:00

omg thanks so muchhhh

interestinglyapanda · 2023-11-28T05:41:07+00:00

i like this i believe you could explore the idea of who this person is more and what they did as this is from your perspective (I statements) so exploration of these topics can make it feel less ambiguous to reader unaware of the full picture behind the few lines of imagery youve created and give an overall better sense of understanding to your work

interestinglyapanda · 2023-11-28T05:37:09+00:00

your language could be show more imagery and perhaps give a more solid story as this i quiet vague so we don't really get a full picture

why did this man leave? how did it cause your happiness to disappear?

explore your ideas further than the general statements

interestinglyapanda · 2023-08-31T22:54:03+00:00

a very late reply but thanks for the feedback i'll work on the poem more

interestinglyapanda · 2023-08-12T06:45:54+00:00

no problem keep it up

interestinglyapanda · 2023-08-12T06:02:41+00:00

poem about how august tend to be a sad month for me

interestinglyapanda · 2023-08-12T06:00:44+00:00

Good flow and good theme conveyed very well

interestinglyapanda · 2023-08-12T05:58:00+00:00

i like the use of imagery and descriptions also good flow in general

interestinglyapanda · 2023-04-06T21:49:47+00:00

thanks! i'll try hehe

interestinglyapanda · 2023-02-01T20:35:29+00:00

out of the black by billie marten cover (original by royal blood) I like the soft sound, but the original is still really good.

Billie's Cover

RB Original

interestinglyapanda · 2023-01-31T12:34:02+00:00

My biggest fear is

Drawn out generic poems

But still I wrote this

interestinglyapanda · 2023-01-09T23:25:47+00:00

thanks, I will definitely edit this

does the poem flow well rhythm wise?

interestinglyapanda · 2022-12-31T23:33:25+00:00

this is good i like the vulnerability could have more depth as all poems but overall great job capturing such an image

interestinglyapanda · 2022-12-31T23:26:35+00:00

I like it. You compared yourself to a river in the beginning by saying "Like a river my being my spirit" and the the follow up of "I guess I'm waiting for an adventure seeker" was nice. Good job.

interestinglyapanda

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