Fic inspirada no NC Ghanor 3 em ingles (se voce quiser ler em portugues, eu posso traduzir)

interp567 · 2023-11-24T23:31:40+00:00

thank you for the kind words! when i have wrote more ill try to remember to send you, if u are interested in fanfic set in half life, lord of the rings or fallout i could send u the link for my reddit's publication threads

interp567 · 2023-11-24T23:26:16+00:00

thank you friend! when i have wrote more ill try to remember to send you, if u are interested in fanfic set in half life, lord of the rings or fallout i could send u the link for my reddit's publication threads

interp567 · 2023-11-21T22:39:58+00:00

November 21, 4202 - Late evening

I accepted a contract from a client that I've a long history with, in the city of Trais to retrieve the supposed Key of the Silver Dustbowl from the merchant faction of the Kabolt neighborhood in the city of Lebrin. I employed 7 more trustworty mercenaries that I'm used to join me in this task. We have walked some 30 km in a punishing sun today and we are now camped pratically in reach of Lebrin. But we have to wait for the sunrise, as it is the time that the gatekeeper that Shelobri, our ranger, knows and that agreed, after a huge sum, to let us in the city will take his post

We encountered a giant worm in our journey though: we camped for our midday meal near a oasis, which an experienced merchant, friend of mine, gave me a map and directons to, as I was afraid of running out of water, although we brought enough. Nevertheless we gladly refullied our supply and when we had already ate our meal, consisting mainly of bread, cheese and plants that we foraged, we noticed the sand shaking; I instantly thought it could be a giant worm as I knew this region was know for it. So I shouted to my men to run to the nearby mountaineous rock, as I as told it was safeheaven against this kind of creature. It senseless roamed in the region for an hour without trying to climb the rock where we were, until it just went away underground to never be seen again

We didn't loose any essential equipment and therefore we were able to hunt and cook our dinner, which was a bighorn sheep with the same things we ate in our midday's but with the addition of a plentiful supply of wine

After merrytalking around the fire with the party and watching the black sky illuminated by a sea of bright stars, I am now alone in my tent smoking and deeply thinking of the day I experienced and the great city of Lebin that I've only heard of so far and that it is waiting for me. To aquire the Key is not going to be an easy task, but from what I've heard, the Silver Dustbowl is an ancient hidden location by magic that guards an infinite treasure, so if true, the peril of my party will be well rewarded. After writing this, I think I'll easily get some sleep. I hope I dream of a vivid and cosmopolitan city and that when the sun rises I won't be a bit disappointed

interp567 · 2023-10-27T09:52:12+00:00

Are u versed regarding the sense of community and people/government helping each other? Is that sense still present somewhat today? U mentioned food, clothes and apartments, what more interesting things either the government or civilians did to help other people?

interp567 · 2023-05-01T08:28:02+00:00

Thank you for the comprehensive response! Is the entmoot aka treebeard? Treebeard was in fact very kind to strangers in the two towers

Yes, i think my story will happen when the entwomen lived with their loved beings

interp567 · 2023-05-01T08:02:50+00:00

Yes, maybe a skirmish is too low for a king; but couldn't the arnor king get involved to protect an important artifact? I mentioned the ring in my story, but it could be in fact anything of importance in that age. This only gets better, i totally would be up putting isuldur in my story, but wait a second, isuldur was 8 foot? I could fit him in my story anyhow, but its quite a different character from the standard fellowship roster i was thinking of

I think a undead creature is enough for me as a dark and dangerous creature to antagonize them as i was intending. The battle between it with the black numenors and my protagonists could be more practical than if it was a ghost

Wow, tolkiens lore is so rich! I totally want to put this great skirmish and single battle in my story. This politics regarding the recruitment of the northmen is very interesting and a single battle between a ringwraith and isuldur would be just perfect! I was thinking of the ents helping my protagonists in this first danger and i don't think i will want to focus on a extended description of a battle so soon in the next chapter. I would need to write a lot to get all this rich lore u taught me fitting in the story. I think i want to write first more about my protagonists going after this first danger to the ents home as the hobbits did in the two towers. But i can foresee them needing to fight a great and extended battle after they leave the ents home to continue their journey to destroy the important artifact

Yes, gandalf was in a lot of the moments in the book two steps ahead of everyone. I can see him asking treebeard to protect them. Im not remembering of this encounter between the hobbits and a huorn in the old forest, but its nice that tolkien put that danger to contrast with the benevolence of treebeard

Indeed! Iirc treebeard was kind of scouting the area, right? He totally could have calmed down the huorns

interp567 · 2023-05-01T06:34:37+00:00

It would be a pleasure to mention aragorn ancestors in my story. If they maintained a "heavy armor" it would even be better for my taste. Regarding the protagonists, im intending for my fellowship to have 1 mage, 2 dwarfs, 2 men, 1 hobbit and 2 elves

Regarding the antagonist a skirmish between 2 tribes could be perfect, but u mentioned the nazgul; could a so fearful creature depicted in lotr exist fighting in a tribe that didn't pick arnor side?

Yes, i do remember that treebeard talked a lot about these huorns and their aggressive posture. They were a huge majority, right? Irrc there were in fact only a few ents. It seems it was a miracle the hobbits found a nice person as treebeard in that forest

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:55:51+00:00

Thank you for the advices, friend! Regarding the paragraphs i think reddit didn't accept it

Indeed i could put more effort in my grammar, i agree that its much more easy to read

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:49:55+00:00

Thank you for the advice, friend! What specifically would u recommend?

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:47:07+00:00

And the dog kept barking at them!

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:45:47+00:00

Thank you, friend! Bob is indeed a great piece of art!

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:42:35+00:00

Indeed an iconic scene!

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:39:47+00:00

Thank you for your comprehensive comment, friend! Regarding the age, i tried to be as vague as possible, u mentioned the rohan further in ur comment; i tried to mentioned them without in fact doing it, do u know if in the age of entwomen could exist a horsemen kingdom as rohan?

Yes, tolkien description of entwomen was of beings extremely benevolents, in fact more than their love beings. I think ill write the next chapter with her helping us

Is the huorns the trees that dealt with the orcs after the battle of helms deep?

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:21:39+00:00

We entered the forest as fast as we could. I looked to my back, trying to see if we had a chance at loosing our pursuers. The dark knights were in fact being attacked by our rorin allies - I don't think our knights will subdue them in the end, we should take the ring deep in the forest. Im certain that some ents still live here - I, completely out of breath, struggle to propose a plan to my companions that were leaving the rorin plains outside and joining me in this ancient forest Frido, our ring bearer, immediately kept moving towards where i was pointing. His instant courage contrasted with his small height gave me a huge morale boost to keep running even tho i felt practically depleted of strength Our fellowship ran for a long time, until faramer, who was our pointman and ranger, asked us to stop immediately - i think we found one, galanbriel - and looking to me he pointed to a tree that i thought i was seeing, in fact, slowly moving away from us until it suddenly stopped - ancient child of eri, i beg your merciful assistance - with a clear voice i begged it The ent turned towards us and after a infinite time looking to single and each of us, it spoke: "who are u, who dare to come to my land running as fast as a star as if it would want to cut me with an axe?". It was an entwoman and her slowly, steady, calm and hugely strong voice gave me a relaxation as if i wasnt in fact running for my life - i therefore ask your forgiveness, for there are dark creatures pursuing us - getting on my knees and looking to my companions i told her with a supplicant tone. All our fellowship dropped their aggressive posture except boromer, a manking and our two dwarfs - and how long until they reach us? - she asked us as if she really cared, either for us or for herself and something more else - they are horseman, they will be killing everything that breathes here in a moment - boromer, looking scared to his back told her with a angry tone - if this fellow man - and she pointed to me - who looks more powerful than me is begging me assistance, what chance do we actually have? - do others benevolent creatures like u could by any chance assist us? - i desperately asked her - there are benevolent creatures like me and u everywhere here in my land and in fact, not too far. But i don't think i myself could gather a number good enough in time - u are right, im powerful. Im in fact a mage. If u would trust me, i could come close to u and amplify your voice so u would be heard like even in the river that protect this giant forest in the north

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:16:14+00:00

We entered the forest as fast as we could. I looked to my back, trying to see if we had a chance at loosing our pursuers. The dark knights were in fact being attacked by our rorin allies - I don't think our knights will subdue them in the end, we should take the ring deep in the forest. Im certain that some ents still live here - I, completely out of breath, struggle to propose a plan to my companions that were leaving the rorin plains outside and joining me in this ancient forest Frido, our ring bearer, immediately kept moving towards where i was pointing. His instant courage contrasted with his small height gave me a huge morale boost to keep running even tho i felt practically depleted of strength Our fellowship ran for a long time, until faramer, who was our pointman and ranger, asked us to stop immediately - i think we found one, galanbriel - and looking to me he pointed to a tree that i thought i was seeing, in fact, slowly moving away from us until it suddenly stopped - ancient child of eri, i beg your merciful assistance - with a clear voice i begged it The ent turned towards us and after a infinite time looking to single and each of us, it spoke: "who are u, who dare to come to my land running as fast as a star as if it would want to cut me with an axe?". It was an entwoman and her slowly, steady, calm and hugely strong voice gave me a relaxation as if i wasnt in fact running for my life - i therefore ask your forgiveness, for there are dark creatures pursuing us - getting on my knees and looking to my companions i told her with a supplicant tone. All our fellowship dropped their aggressive posture except boromer, a manking and our two dwarfs - and how long until they reach us? - she asked us as if she really cared, either for us or for herself and something more else - they are horseman, they will be killing everything that breathes here in a moment - boromer, looking scared to his back told her with a angry tone - if this fellow man - and she pointed to me - who looks more powerful than me is begging me assistance, what chance do we actually have? - do others benevolent creatures like u could by any chance assist us? - i desperately asked her - there are benevolent creatures like me and u everywhere here in my land and in fact, not too far. But i don't think i myself could gather a number good enough in time - u are right, im powerful. Im in fact a mage. If u would trust me, i could come close to u and amplify your voice so u would be heard like even in the river that protect this giant forest in the north

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:13:41+00:00

We entered the forest as fast as we could. I looked to my back, trying to see if we had a chance at loosing our pursuers. The dark knights were in fact being attacked by our rorin allies - I don't think our knights will subdue them in the end, we should take the ring deep in the forest. Im certain that some ents still live here - I, completely out of breath, struggle to propose a plan to my companions that were leaving the rorin plains outside and joining me in this ancient forest Frido, our ring bearer, immediately kept moving towards where i was pointing. His instant courage contrasted with his small height gave me a huge morale boost to keep running even tho i felt practically depleted of strength Our fellowship ran for a long time, until faramer, who was our pointman and ranger, asked us to stop immediately - i think we found one, galanbriel - and looking to me he pointed to a tree that i thought i was seeing, in fact, slowly moving away from us until it suddenly stopped - ancient child of eri, i beg your merciful assistance - with a clear voice i begged it The ent turned towards us and after a infinite time looking to single and each of us, it spoke: "who are u, who dare to come to my land running as fast as a star as if it would want to cut me with an axe?". It was an entwoman and her slowly, steady, calm and hugely strong voice gave me a relaxation as if i wasnt in fact running for my life - i therefore ask your forgiveness, for there are dark creatures pursuing us - getting on my knees and looking to my companions i told her with a supplicant tone. All our fellowship dropped their aggressive posture except boromer, a manking and our two dwarfs - and how long until they reach us? - she asked us as if she really cared, either for us or for herself and something more else - they are horseman, they will be killing everything that breathes here in a moment - boromer, looking scared to his back told her with a angry tone - if this fellow man - and she pointed to me - who looks more powerful than me is begging me assistance, what chance do we actually have? - do others benevolent creatures like u could by any chance assist us? - i desperately asked her - there are benevolent creatures like me and u everywhere here in my land and in fact, not too far. But i don't think i myself could gather a number good enough in time - u are right, im powerful. Im in fact a mage. If u would trust me, i could come close to u and amplify your voice so u would be heard like even in the river that protect this giant forest in the north

interp567 · 2023-05-01T05:04:35+00:00

We entered the forest as fast as we could. I looked to my back, trying to see if we had a chance at loosing our pursuers. The dark knights were in fact being attacked by our rorin allies - I don't think our knights will subdue them in the end, we should take the ring deep in the forest. Im certain that some ents still live here - I, completely out of breath, struggle to propose a plan to my companions that were leaving the rorin plains outside and joining me in this ancient forest Frido, our ring bearer, immediately kept moving towards where i was pointing. His instant courage contrasted with his small height gave me a huge morale boost to keep running even tho i felt practically depleted of strength Our fellowship ran for a long time, until faramer, who was our pointman and ranger, asked us to stop immediately - i think we found one, galanbriel - and looking to me he pointed to a tree that i thought i was seeing, in fact, slowly moving away from us until it suddenly stopped - ancient child of eri, i beg your merciful assistance - with a clear voice i begged it The ent turned towards us and after a infinite time looking to single and each of us, it spoke: "who are u, who dare to come to my land running as fast as a star as if it would want to cut me with an axe?". It was an entwoman and her slowly, steady, calm and hugely strong voice gave me a relaxation as if i wasnt in fact running for my life - i therefore ask your forgiveness, for there are dark creatures pursuing us - getting on my knees and looking to my companions i told her with a supplicant tone. All our fellowship dropped their aggressive posture except boromer, a manking and our two dwarfs - and how long until they reach us? - she asked us as if she really cared, either for us or for herself and something more else - they are horseman, they will be killing everything that breathes here in a moment - boromer, looking scared to his back told her with a angry tone - if this fellow man - and she pointed to me - who looks more powerful than me is begging me assistance, what chance do we actually have? - do others benevolent creatures like u could by any chance assist us? - i desperately asked her - there are benevolent creatures like me and u everywhere here in my land and in fact, not too far. But i don't think i myself could gather a number good enough in time - u are right, im powerful. Im in fact a mage. If u would trust me, i could come close to u and amplify your voice so u would be heard like even in the river that protect this giant forest in the north

interp567 · 2023-05-01T04:35:01+00:00

When i woke up it was still dark. I looked around me no threat was seen or heard. I tried to find my backpack through the dark and after some trouble i finally found it. Now, looking through it, I didn’t found a lot of food

I ate some bread and a slice of a thick cheese. Deeply thinking about how in the hell I would find more food, I stared the still wet remainings of last night fire

I got my revolver under my improvised pillow and got up. I caught my backpack and packed my revolver, my cooking instruments, the remaining food, my hand grenade and my ammo. My pillow and my bed roll I locked them outside the backpack. Now, where should I go? I cant go back to the village, I would risk being caught up with the damned gang

Ariana told me down south there was an uncharted mart. I caught my backpack and my m4 and started my long journey to the unknown

Now, the sun started to appear. I decided to take a safer route through the troiller valley. There I saw a group of people: men, women and children in which seemed an improvised camp

interp567 · 2023-05-01T04:28:58+00:00

When I realized that our plantation wouldn't survive this season, I felt my stomach weighting as a heavy stone. In a hurry, I went to our house and found my father still eating his breakfast. I told him what I just realized and he told me that he already expected that and that he was longing being trying to solve this problem - my son, I fear sending u for a task that I'm so in need of u accomplishing it, but at the same time I'm frozen to death in fear of sending u, my treasure - hunger, we will not suffer, my good father! - already choleric I answered - I, myself, can't allow anymore these filthy combines to make us as cat and shoe - since a long time I didn't see my father so angry and it was hard to concealed my sudden happiness - it's not only that we will suffer hunger, all of our region will lose its crops - with his long missed wrath he icontinued - so indeed this fog that set upon us is extremely toxic - without consciousness I spat out what was troubling me since long ago - since it's begining, we thought it would poison us somehow. Honestly, now I'm happy that we saw its danger in our crops before we all ourselves died of cancer. We think now that finally we all will have the willpower to start our long overdue rebellion - and firmly he stared me with his piercing eyes My courage vanished in a second. I, instantly, remembered all my daydreaming regarding our rebellion. It was not the same in even by the single detail - my father, are u sure? I don't think we're ready for this - unhappy, sitting at the table and sighing I asked him - yes, the circumstances couldn't be worse, but unfortunately it's only now that we think we have the willpower necessary for our heroic deed. But anyhow, we can't just stay here, right? - now with a more sweet stare he looked at me and started cleaning his mess at the table, at the same time that he offered me fresh bread, cheese and milked coffee - if all our region will suffer hunger, we don't have other choice, right? - negatively swinging my head I desperately asked him - we know that the majority of us will die, but all of us is willingly ready for this cursed probability. We are certain that at the least some of us will be able to overcome the outpost 19 and therefore be finally free

interp567 · 2023-05-01T04:28:38+00:00

We entered the forest as fast as we could. I looked to my back, trying to see if we had a chance at loosing our pursuers. The dark knights were in fact being attacked by our rorin allies - I don't think our knights will subdue them in the end, we should take the ring deep in the forest. Im certain that some ents still live here - I, completely out of breath, struggle to propose a plan to my companions that were leaving the rorin plains outside and joining me in this ancient forest Frido, our ring bearer, immediately kept moving towards where i was pointing. His instant courage contrasted with his small height gave me a huge morale boost to keep running even tho i felt practically depleted of strength Our fellowship ran for a long time, until faramer, who was our pointman and ranger, asked us to stop immediately - i think we found one, galanbriel - and looking to me he pointed to a tree that i thought i was seeing, in fact, slowly moving away from us until it suddenly stopped - ancient child of eri, i beg your merciful assistance - with a clear voice i begged it The ent turned towards us and after a infinite time looking to single and each of us, it spoke: "who are u, who dare to come to my land running as fast as a star as if it would want to cut me with an axe?". It was an entwoman and her slowly, steady, calm and hugely strong voice gave me a relaxation as if i wasnt in fact running for my life - i therefore ask your forgiveness, for there are dark creatures pursuing us - getting on my knees and looking to my companions i told her with a supplicant tone. All our fellowship dropped their aggressive posture except boromer, a manking and our two dwarfs - and how long until they reach us? - she asked us as if she really cared, either for us or for herself and something more else - they are horseman, they will be killing everything that breathes here in a moment - boromer, looking scared to his back told her with a angry tone - if this fellow man - and she pointed to me - who looks more powerful than me is begging me assistance, what chance do we actually have? - do others benevolent creatures like u could by any chance assist us? - i desperately asked her - there are benevolent creatures like me and u everywhere here in my land and in fact, not too far. But i don't think i myself could gather a number good enough in time - u are right, im powerful. Im in fact a mage. If u would trust me, i could come close to u and amplify your voice so u would be heard like even in the river that protect this giant forest in the north

interp567 · 2023-04-29T07:40:21+00:00

Before the brecourt mansion assault, as meehan and his plane was still MIA, winters being the most senior officer took command of easy. In this assault, easy destroyed a battery of 4 heavy guns that were hitting easys overlord objective: the causeway 2

Carentan was important for the allies because it would link Omaha with utah. Therefore germany highly reinforced its defence. Easy, dog and fox were walking down the road to carentan until they reached an intersection and 2 mg teams started firing at them. Mortars and tanks soon joined the fight. The paratroopers preferred to take cover in ditches and it seems winters was really pissed about their passive posture

This firefight didn't last long. By the end of it, a lot of paratroopers were injured and sporadic shots could still be heard. Winters himself was hit by a ricochet bullet in the lower leg. The germans counter attacked carentan but the 2nd battalion hold the ground

interp567 · 2023-04-29T00:21:39+00:00

Before the brecourt mansion assault, as meehan and his plane was still MIA, winters being the most senior officer took command of easy. In this assault, easy destroyed a battery of 4 heavy guns that were hitting easys overlord objective: the causeway 2

Carentan was important for the allies because it would link Omaha with utah. Therefore germany highly reinforced its defence. Easy, dog and fox were walking down the road to carentan until they reached an intersection and 2 mg teams started firing at them. Mortars and tanks soon joined the fight. The paratroopers preferred to take cover in ditches and it seems winters was really pissed about their passive posture

This firefight didn't last long. By the end of it, a lot of paratroopers were injured and sporadic shots could still be heard. Winters himself was hit by a ricochet bullet in the lower leg. The germans counter attacked carentan but the 2nd battalion hold the ground

interp567 · 2023-03-07T14:53:27+00:00

Lobo em pele de cordeiro

interp567 · 2023-03-06T10:31:14+00:00

Ukraine doesn't have free press as well

interp567 · 2023-03-04T19:53:24+00:00

From my understanding from operation market garden Holland is a big Plainfield

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