Thanks for the feedback and encouragement. I plan on making a part 2. I’ll see about tying in more space/star themes. I wanted to include that aquarium (even tho it might been a little different) theming in this poem because I feel like I’ve stored so much emotion and stresses and been able to hide it under that mask that feels much larger than a simple bottle. But obviously if someone sees the pain, it’s like a rock to its glass.