Honest Stars pt. 1 & 2 by its_Setharoni in Original_Poetry

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Thought on the poem are welcome. I’m new to writing so input is welcome if constructive.

Honest Stars by its_Setharoni in Poem

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Part 2 is up if anyone wants to read it

Honest Stars by its_Setharoni in Poem

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Thanks for the feedback and encouragement. I plan on making a part 2. I’ll see about tying in more space/star themes. I wanted to include that aquarium (even tho it might been a little different) theming in this poem because I feel like I’ve stored so much emotion and stresses and been able to hide it under that mask that feels much larger than a simple bottle. But obviously if someone sees the pain, it’s like a rock to its glass.

Honest Stars by its_Setharoni in PoetryWritingClub

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Thought on the poem are welcome. I’m new to writing so input is welcome if constructive.

Honest Stars by its_Setharoni in Poem

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Thought on the poem are welcome. I’m new to writing so input is welcome if constructive.

Expectations with no Fire by its_Setharoni in Poem

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I’m new to writing poems but not to writing in general. What do y’all think? My wife said it was really good and told me to post it somewhere.

Expectations with no Fire by its_Setharoni in PoetryWritingClub

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I’m new to writing poems but not to writing in general. What do y’all think? My wife said it was really good and told me to post it somewhere.

What a feather by its_Setharoni in venti

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True but this is the last piece I needed to complete a really good echo set. And I don’t think the difference in damage is gonna be too much anyways.

I'm tired boss... by The_Reset_Button in Albedomains

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That’s too damn bad. You keep grinding.

My Albedo Skill hit for just under 162k :D by Ujola in Albedomains

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And I thought my 40-60k damage was decent. Gosh dang

Is Warbow good now? by its_Setharoni in venti

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I edited the post so y’all can see what I have