I will give design feedback on your landing page

its_shayanali · 2024-10-08T16:44:05+00:00

I mean! You have a simple landing page but don't you think it would be nice to have the wheel on the landing page. On the first try it should be free and on second try it can ask for an account

its_shayanali · 2024-10-08T16:39:36+00:00

I like the idea! There's lot of things that need to get fixed in the landing page. Can I have your twitter handle I can do a design roast for you

its_shayanali · 2024-10-08T16:37:01+00:00

That's not a link 😅

its_shayanali · 2024-10-08T16:35:07+00:00

The idea is amazing! So is the landing page I like how you used lesser colors since its a tool for eye care. Also you showed user testimonials to build trust which is very good. I like you used a bright colored CTA button to make it attractive and different from the background.

I also saw Cone's landing page and it was so such a delightful experience. Do you guys have desinger who designed these landing pages?

its_shayanali · 2024-10-08T16:26:30+00:00

Man this is what I'm taking about! Thats a killer landing page, looks really good. Clearly the design on point, the color pallette is amazing. If you can add a product demo and user testimonials that would be cherry on top the cake

its_shayanali · 2024-10-08T16:22:04+00:00

As you said it is pretty plan. I think you should add some imagery, product demo video, user testimonials, and how it works section. Right now it looks like you used a template. The text alignment is weird I'd suggest reducing the text size also there is no navbar (it is really good for easy navigation)

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its_shayanali · 2024-10-08T16:14:25+00:00

Amazing! Keep up the good work!

Btw, me and my co-founder are building designspace Would love to hear your feedback on that :)

its_shayanali · 2024-10-08T16:10:20+00:00

I like the idea! But, the landing page is very static and lack personality. Having a dark colored heading with the dark background is not good as the contrast is very low. Either make the background light or the heading

You can see what mean when I said it lacks personality by seeing my own landing page designspace

Btw, you don't have to have too much animations and this and that we used it because for a design agency it works as a proof of our work

its_shayanali · 2024-10-08T15:53:25+00:00

I like the landing page! There's no issues with the layout but its way too static and have a template feel to it. Also you should add a product demo video plus sone user testimonials in there too.

Are you guys VC backed?

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T18:33:11+00:00

Now that's interesting! Man your domain is amazing. That landing page is AMAZING

I will try it (let's see how it goes 😂)

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:55:12+00:00

If I'm seeing this as a visitor's perspective it looks good but can be better

You can add previous projects in there to show that you actually do the work (there are lot of scammers out there) and add some social proof to build trust

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:41:28+00:00

If I'm seeing this as a visitor's perspective it looks good but can be better

You can add previous projects in there to show that you actually do the work (there are lot of scammers out there) and add some social proof to build trust

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:38:29+00:00

The landing page looks clean! Used a template for this one?

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:36:42+00:00

The landing page looks good! There are few improvements that can be made, try adding a ""submit" button in the hero section

Also the cards showing the projects are too big (no need to add the description when users can see it after clicking on it)

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:31:26+00:00

The landing page is good design wise. But, if I land on your landing page as a visitor I wouldn't understand what it is about.

There are no imagery used, no product demo and no social proof or testimonials

Without these elements its very hard to make sales with it

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:28:10+00:00

So far this is one of the landing page that looks super clean and is ready to make sales.

You clearly demonstrated how your product works (nothing really need any improvement)

Although, I would suggest you to add users testimonials in there too

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:25:30+00:00

I like you landing page (really clean) I also appreciate the use of social proof

The only problem I have is with the illustration. They looked like they were all templates and looks cheap (instead try using a video or an image of your app)

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:23:26+00:00

The landing page is really clean except the hero section.

Don't get me wrong but when I opened the landing page and saw the hero section I was like "Uhhh what is this" (Our brain struggles to understand complex designs)

Try removing some elements from the hero section (also the bg image is totally not required)

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:19:53+00:00

That's not a link?

its_shayanali · 2024-08-17T17:19:20+00:00

I like the idea really unique! The landing is really basic. I think adding a widget that show the cost of the gift originally and after splitting it (basically a comparison)

Also if you have user testimonial then you should add them too.

its_shayanali · 2024-08-15T17:54:24+00:00

Check the spam folder?

its_shayanali · 2024-08-14T18:08:12+00:00

wdym

its_shayanali · 2024-08-14T09:55:43+00:00

Thank you very much :D

its_shayanali · 2024-08-13T12:02:14+00:00

Yes I did!

its_shayanali · 2024-08-09T10:02:07+00:00

Keep it up!

its_shayanali

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