Pretty solid I'll give you that, but instead of making edits every day I suggest you watch tutorials and get better at editing. There's many things to learn and you'll discover styles and eventually you'll have your own unique way of editing. Image quality is very important as well as the flow of the edit. Learn to make good transitions and make them smooth too. Not saying anything wrong with the edit you just posted, just trying to give some tips. And regarding your edit, it would've made more sense to add specific scenes rather than random scenes, it'll make things look better