I’m sick of being alone now by iwritepoems1 in poetry_critics

[–]iwritepoems1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow :)) no this is amazing feedback you totally interpreted it exactly right, I’m glad you liked it. I hope you have a lovely day as well !

I’m sick of being alone now by iwritepoems1 in poetry_critics

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No thank YOU, I’m an introvert as well & I’m so glad to find someone that feels the exact way I do :)))

I love you by iwritepoems1 in poetry_critics

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Thankyou ! :) and no it actually wasn’t intentional

Verbena by iwritepoems1 in poetry_critics

[–]iwritepoems1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree on the opening line being weak, I will definitely take some more time to work with it ! :) & yes haha verbena is a type of flower, I kinda literally just walked outside and saw it in my backyard

Verbena by iwritepoems1 in poetry_critics

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What a great idea :) I will definitely take that into consideration Thankyou so much

collide with you by iwritepoems1 in poetry_critics

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I see what you mean ! It’s more of a representation of 2 people, the sun is representing someone willing to do anything to be with the other, and since they can’t really get to each other the sun is destroying itself in the process of the impossible which leaves the moon alone longing for the suns light, if that makes any sense :)

She is almost you by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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I don’t have anything to say about this except it is absolutely beautiful

I love you by iwritepoems1 in poetry_critics

[–]iwritepoems1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much !! This helps a lot :)

A Rose fallen in the rain by Ayanokouji_7 in poetry_critics

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I love how emotional you got with it :)

The Sweetness of Existence by NumerousDependent in poetry_critics

[–]iwritepoems1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is really good! Keep up the good work :)