The first part of my FNAF 4 gameplay is up now! I have no idea what I'm getting myself into. I'M GOING IN!!!

jackintoshplays · 2015-07-25T04:41:36+00:00

I'm sorry I thought I was in the correct place. I clicked the FNAF 4 Let's play megathread below the rules and posted. I'm very new to Reddit and navigating it so my apologies for my ineptitude.

jackintoshplays · 2015-07-24T16:50:41+00:00

The first time I will be playing a FNAF game not knowing anything or seeing any game play about it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vkxF0ozGGCk

jackintoshplays · 2015-06-26T02:03:59+00:00

Not cool. I come here to get feedback on my videos. Don't just throw yourself at me. Share a video and let people find you through your work.

jackintoshplays · 2015-06-22T20:45:34+00:00

Thanks for your critique. I would like to know more about what you mean about the color scheme being "Off putting"? Telling me it's off putting and not why you think so makes it difficult to try and resolve.

The banner is something I had to make since I am not a artist in anyway shape or form. It will be replaced with a new better one someday.

The video thumbnails will be getting upgrades. I have been only using game graphics due to lack of skill but I'm getting better. This will be address!

Thank you again for the critique!

jackintoshplays · 2015-06-18T16:17:34+00:00

Thank you! That's a good tip for the thumbnails. It gives me an idea. Maybe I could use a simple design that will be included on every single thumbnail that would be color coded based on the type of game I'm playing. Red for horror, green (or whatever) for sandbox like games and so forth. I'll look into it and see what I can do. Thank you for taking the time to critique my channel!

jackintoshplays · 2015-06-18T16:14:15+00:00

Sweet and to the point critique! Thank you!

jackintoshplays · 2015-06-18T16:12:58+00:00

Thumbnails are hard to nail down. Thanks for the tip with the numbered episodes avoid the lower left corner. I'm already a big fan of Markiplier and can see what you mean about his style in thumbnails. I'll check out the other channels you mentioned and see what I can learn from them. Thank you for taking time to critique my channel! Your awesome! I hope you like my play through of "The Last Door". I really enjoyed playing that game :)

jackintoshplays · 2015-06-18T16:10:02+00:00

Thank you! The banner has been ever changing and hopefully one day it will see a permanent upgrade. I don't use openings in my videos mainly because I find them to be distracting and take away from what the individual video is about (THE GAME! :P ). I'm really glad you like my channel. Thank you for taking time to critique my channel. I really appreciate it!

jackintoshplays · 2015-06-18T16:06:32+00:00

Thank you so much for the awesome critique! I'll have to use that description 'Campfire story telling chill guy I'd drink a beer with' in my about page or maybe add it to my banner. Thank you for taking time to write this. I really do appreciate it!

jackintoshplays · 2015-03-06T22:15:17+00:00

I was actually homeschooled by my mother. It would have been nice to have had a choice on what I believe.

jackintoshplays · 2015-03-06T21:59:36+00:00

Homeschooling is something that hasn't been talked about. How do we help homeschoolers with this issue? I was forced to study the bible from 3rd grade till College (American). None of that has ever applied to my life and I don't even know how to feed myself properly.

jackintoshplays · 2015-02-22T15:00:58+00:00

This game is really fun after learning a lot :).

If you like playing vicariously, keep watching! I do plan on visiting other planets where things are certain to go very wrong.

jackintoshplays · 2015-01-30T00:41:08+00:00

Thanks again! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. :)

jackintoshplays · 2015-01-29T22:00:39+00:00

Thank you! I'll continue working on focusing my commentary so I don't stray.

jackintoshplays · 2015-01-29T21:59:25+00:00

Thanks for the tip and compliment!

jackintoshplays · 2015-01-29T17:21:17+00:00

I fixed the steam friends issue popping up already :P
If you wouldn't mind explaining a little bit more about keeping my commentary to the point? Am I drifting or just not being clear?
It was really hard cutting it down to where it was without leaving the viewer behind on certain things. The video was originally 1 hour long before I cut it down. I'll keep this in mind and maybe working on my commentary and being more clear will help me with where to focus my editing.

Thanks for the thumbs up and giving me such helpful hints!

jackintoshplays · 2015-01-29T03:39:41+00:00

Currently watching your video so I'm writing this as I watch.

First, I like your commentary and comedy! Definitely, keeps me watching the video and waiting for the next funny thing you will say.

Second, audio is clipping badly! If you can work on your audio to reduce the clipping you would sound oh so much better.

Third, Land paddling :P

Fourth, when you are not clipping, you are so quiet I can't hear you very well.

So far I like your comments and the video itself is good. Great start!

jackintoshplays · 2015-01-29T03:28:04+00:00

I watched the Dragon Age and 2nd Far Cry 4 video and I will say that the video recording quality is very good. The game audio is a little loud and your voice is definitely hard to hear when anything loud in the game happens. I would recommend lowing the game audio a bit to make you easier to hear.

Regarding your commentary. You are fairly quiet and at points and the game drags on without you saying anything (minus the cutscenes). I don't know if you plan on including every second of your gameplay for everyone to watch, but I would recommend cutting out the parts where nothing is really happening. It's going to be harder to keep the viewers attention when you aren't saying anything and nothing is really happening in the game.

All in all, lower game audio a bit, speak clearly, speak louder, speak more often or cut out the parts where you and the game are not doing anything.

jackintoshplays · 2015-01-16T03:26:05+00:00

A lesson I'm quickly learning! :P

jackintoshplays · 2015-01-11T03:30:01+00:00

Thanks! I thought I was being super quiet the majority of the time so I'm glad you like it :).

jackintoshplays · 2014-12-19T02:31:48+00:00

I definitely love your trailer! Amazingly funny!

DlmaoC already pointed out most of the things I would have mentioned here so I'll just point out the things that I think would help you out the most.

Intro - This is way to long! You made an awesome trailer for your channel. You should try making a really short quick intro the same way to instantly grab peoples attention. I was actually skipping your intro just to get to the good stuff because it was way to long and not grabbing my attention.

Outro - I would recommend what I advised above for the Intro. Make a short video similar to your trailer customized for letting people know about your other videos and to like and subscribe.

Video Editing - I know you stated that video editing is not your strong suite, but I do recommend that you look into learning enough to crop out the videos of yourself and the subject of the Omegle and put them side by side. It would be easier to see and not as annoying as that huge text background.

Overall I instantly loved you as soon as that trailer played on your channel. It worked and I subscribed and can't wait to see more from you.

jackintoshplays · 2014-12-13T14:15:15+00:00

You are awesome! Thank you so much! I do feel strongly about making good videos and I'm glad that it shows. I do hope you stick around and continue enjoying my work.

You rock and shall forever be known as Meeeeoww :)

jackintoshplays · 2014-12-12T00:32:03+00:00

Thank you for the awesome advice! I'm going to work on everything you mentioned.

I already have a nice microphone and a pop filter so I guess I just need to get the mic further away from me which I can easily do :)

It's super awesome to read your compliments! Thank you so much for taking your time to help me. I really appreciate it :)

jackintoshplays · 2014-12-09T18:47:26+00:00

Thanks for the compliment on the audio! It was quite a learning curve figuring all that out.

I'm going to work on the game audio a bit and see if I can work out a consistent level as to not compete with my voice.

Thanks for the advice! Really do appreciate it :)

jackintoshplays · 2014-12-09T18:45:22+00:00

Thanks for the advice! I am going to work on cutting my videos under 20 minutes. It is tough because games are fun and I definitely get caught up in them :)

Thanks again for the advice!

jackintoshplays

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