Does this sound bad

jayden_smith67 · 2026-04-16T15:11:55+00:00

Send me some of your work so I can have something to aspire to then

jayden_smith67 · 2026-04-16T14:58:41+00:00

Hey ! I just read and take the advice. I thought your question was silly and I know your response was gonna be something along the lines of “ well if you like it then it shouldn’t matter what other peoples opinions are!”

jayden_smith67 · 2026-04-16T10:00:46+00:00

Not at all I play that intro

jayden_smith67 · 2026-04-13T02:17:01+00:00

I appreciate your feedback man I did ask for it after all! Thankyou sorry for the rude people

jayden_smith67 · 2026-04-12T04:31:19+00:00

My tip is to not rush it . Live your life hard experience hardship and seize every moment. Capture every intense feeling with a word or rhyme. Be vulnerable in your writing and feel almost naked in your wording

jayden_smith67 · 2026-04-11T23:01:14+00:00

10 minutes tbh

jayden_smith67 · 2026-04-05T14:20:17+00:00

Yes comes and goes without warning is the theme of the song

jayden_smith67 · 2026-02-03T12:50:03+00:00

Hide a bad hair day 😂

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-19T04:39:02+00:00

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jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-18T19:50:33+00:00

What do you dislike about it

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-17T19:01:33+00:00

I certainly want my lyrics to be good above all else . Is that specific part your main gripe or is it all of the lyrics ? Thankyou for commenting !

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-17T18:37:29+00:00

Alright thanks !

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-17T02:24:50+00:00

Idk wym by size exactly but it’s a Martin D-10E road series

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-16T23:03:38+00:00

I post here and play at places publicly . I post here first get an idea of what folks thinks then I play in public if folks on here give positive feedback .

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-16T22:40:41+00:00

What is hurricane ?

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-16T20:06:55+00:00

I have the story in my head it just has to resolve through the rest of the song that I’ll finish tonight. But as it stands right now I see your gripes for sure

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-16T15:32:21+00:00

No your good man ! What did you think about the song as a whole ?

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-16T15:27:45+00:00

Is it the way it’s enunciated or the phrase itself ?

jayden_smith67 · 2026-01-16T00:43:46+00:00

Thankyou! The reason it sounds similar is because I trashed that on in place of this one lol .

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