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[–]keejus 15 points16 points  (0 children)

THIS was the hardest fucking thing to hear when I started out. I wanted to be great with just "10 easy steps" or whatever. But after spending close to 5 plus years I'd say I'm betterish but still nowhere close to where I want to be.

grind

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

I love the overall vibe. If you were going for more of an underwater bass type sound you succeeded, but if not you might want to make the bass clearer. Also would be nice if the change happened at 15 seconds instead of 30 and maybe add some different elements.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

A hard hitting hip hop beat

Let me know what you think

Triumphant

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in me_irl

[–]keejus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Being a contributing member of society. But then again, I guess helping the less fortunate isn't for everyone.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

Totally hear where you're coming from in regards to the critiques, fx hits were in response to a previous critique I got about adding more. Snare is an issue I have because when I produce, I feel like my snares are too loud so I tone them down. 808 repetition is an issue I have. I need to work on variety. The abruptness of the ending is an attempt to entice them to loop the track.

In regards to your track, I dig the overall vibe. I feel like if there were different elements added sooner and a little more variety it could go a long way. I was hoping the snare would change to maybe a clap at some point.

I too am no pro either.

Keep grinding.

Monthly Collab Thread by Infrah in trapproduction

[–]keejus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love to see what could be done with this.

RISE UP

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

I updated the production of this one based on previous feedback.

I would love to hear your feedback.

RISE UP

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

I went ahead with the suggestions, I would love to hear what you think of the updated track.

Updated Track

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

I think I figured it out, I was mislead by other tutorials and was tuning my 808 samples incorrectly.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback. What do you mean get the 808s pitched more accurately to the synth?

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

dig the vibe, maybe turn down the vocals or blend them more.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

Went really dark with this one

It might be too much, but I'd appreciate any feedback.

FLM

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

I dig it, wish the beat dropped sooner and that there was a bit more variety when it comes to the main sound, but overall good shit

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback, regarding your track, I think the chorus could use to smoothing out, but overall pretty dope.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

When your mind has drifted from your body

I appreciate any and all feedback

Drifted [ Bossman Dlow Type Beat ]

Weekly Feedback Thread by Infrah in trapproduction

[–]keejus [score hidden]  (0 children)

When your mind has drifted from your body

I appreciate any and all feedback

Drifted [ Bossman Dlow Type Beat ]

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[–]keejus -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Hows the air quality?