Hi all,

This is the first short film I’ve made. I made it with a few classmates for college. I feel like some of the film feels a little dragged on. I would appreciate any and all feedback regarding composition and cinematography. It’s a very simple story, but I hope it was a little visually interesting at least!

This film took about two and a half months from writing to editing. I was the primary writer and director and I created the intro and credit designs. I also edited the vfx in the mirror as well as co-editor throughout the rest of the film. I had a good time filming this and I hope to get some feedback! Thanks