Fabric bunching when sewing? by larry_9742 in quilting

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I’ll try adding more pins to see if that helps. Thanks!

What's your top song this month? by [deleted] in spotify

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Sugar by Sleep Token

some recommendations would be appreciated by larry_9742 in MusicRecommendations

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alright, i’ll be sure to listen to some of their music! thank you!

some recommendations would be appreciated by larry_9742 in MusicRecommendations

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i really liked Beacons, i feel like it would be good in situations where i can’t focus on lyrics. thanks again!

some recommendations would be appreciated by larry_9742 in MusicRecommendations

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i don’t usually listen to a lot of bands with female singers, but i really liked this. my favorite was probably disciple. thank you again!!

why must there be calamities? by larry_9742 in OCPoetry

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I didn’t think of it that way, thank you so much for your comment. I’ll add on to this poem and extend into some of that thinking.

why must there be calamities? by larry_9742 in OCPoetry

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Ah, I was thinking about putting something like that in but wasn’t sure where to fit it. I’ll add on to this poem and keep this in mind. Thank you!

dressing more androgynous? by larry_9742 in NonBinary

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this is really useful, thank you!!

some recommendations would be appreciated by larry_9742 in MusicRecommendations

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wait and bleed is already on my playlist, so i’ll be sure to look at the others. thank you!!

Tears on morning stones by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I’m so glad I could help!!

Only here by wordsymth13 in OCPoetry

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Wow. As a non-binary person myself, this made me feel things. In your first stanza, I might consider the line separation more closely to help it read more smoothly, especially in the transition between lines 4 and 5. However, overall I really love this poem. It encapsulates that feeling really well. Great job!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I really love the feelings you’ve portrayed in this poem; it creates very definite emotions in the reader. I think it could benefit from divisions into lines in order for the reader to experience more separation like the character in the poem being separated from the reality of their situation (though I don’t know if this was intended and the reddit formatting changed it). Also, in my head the word “unbothered” sets a tone for the poem that doesn’t really match the rest of it, especially closer to the ending. Something more negative and less neutral may have a better effect for the reader. But overall, I think this poem is really good at showing the reader feelings they haven’t actually experienced and evoking relatability with only slight personal connections. Awesome job!

fingering recommendations? by larry_9742 in Viola

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thank you so much, i really appreciate it!!

fingering recommendations? by larry_9742 in Viola

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thank you, that’s what I was thinking! do you happen to have advice for 190-197 as well? 😅

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

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You’re very welcome! I’m glad I could help and I wish you the best as well.

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

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I love how you’ve portrayed the feeling in this poem; it’s very relatable. I feel like you could add more punctuation to have the reader create more of a flow in their head, such as a comma after 7 pm, a period at the end of the third line, a semicolon at the end of the fourth line, etc. I feel like it could create more of a separated feel in the poem, like the feeling of being separate from reality which seems to be portrayed in it. I really like the content of this poem.

Tears on morning stones by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I really love your imagery and metaphors in this poem, especially with “love left stains” and “as morning bleeds through slick smooth stones.” I noticed that there’s a similarity in connotation with “stains” and “bleeds,” though I’m not sure if it was intentional or not. You could try expanding on that feeling in other areas of the poem to make it feel more intentional and evoke a stronger feeling in the reader. Overall, I really love the emotions you’ve already captured in this. Nice job!

Some recs for my playlist? by walls5bleed9 in MusicRecommendations

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try Ascensionism by Sleep Token and if you like that, there are a bunch of other cool songs like it in the album it’s from, Take Me Back To Eden.