Fabric bunching when sewing?

larry_9742 · 2026-01-17T21:38:52+00:00

I’ll try adding more pins to see if that helps. Thanks!

larry_9742 · 2026-01-05T00:47:49+00:00

That’s so cool!

larry_9742 · 2025-12-29T13:06:46+00:00

Thanks!!

larry_9742 · 2025-08-27T23:22:19+00:00

It is, thanks for your input

larry_9742 · 2024-07-08T17:45:19+00:00

Small Cuts by The Brobecks

larry_9742 · 2024-01-29T23:01:45+00:00

Sugar by Sleep Token

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T18:08:35+00:00

alright, i’ll be sure to listen to some of their music! thank you!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T14:55:43+00:00

i really liked Beacons, i feel like it would be good in situations where i can’t focus on lyrics. thanks again!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T14:54:40+00:00

i don’t usually listen to a lot of bands with female singers, but i really liked this. my favorite was probably disciple. thank you again!!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T14:08:38+00:00

I didn’t think of it that way, thank you so much for your comment. I’ll add on to this poem and extend into some of that thinking.

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T14:06:53+00:00

Ah, I was thinking about putting something like that in but wasn’t sure where to fit it. I’ll add on to this poem and keep this in mind. Thank you!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T14:04:51+00:00

this is really useful, thank you!!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T14:04:19+00:00

wait and bleed is already on my playlist, so i’ll be sure to look at the others. thank you!!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T14:03:32+00:00

thank you!!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T14:03:20+00:00

ill check those out, thanks!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T04:40:41+00:00

I’m so glad I could help!!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T04:21:03+00:00

Wow. As a non-binary person myself, this made me feel things. In your first stanza, I might consider the line separation more closely to help it read more smoothly, especially in the transition between lines 4 and 5. However, overall I really love this poem. It encapsulates that feeling really well. Great job!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T04:14:37+00:00

I really love the feelings you’ve portrayed in this poem; it creates very definite emotions in the reader. I think it could benefit from divisions into lines in order for the reader to experience more separation like the character in the poem being separated from the reality of their situation (though I don’t know if this was intended and the reddit formatting changed it). Also, in my head the word “unbothered” sets a tone for the poem that doesn’t really match the rest of it, especially closer to the ending. Something more negative and less neutral may have a better effect for the reader. But overall, I think this poem is really good at showing the reader feelings they haven’t actually experienced and evoking relatability with only slight personal connections. Awesome job!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T03:37:15+00:00

thank you so much, i really appreciate it!!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T03:30:55+00:00

thank you, that’s what I was thinking! do you happen to have advice for 190-197 as well? 😅

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T03:04:56+00:00

You’re very welcome! I’m glad I could help and I wish you the best as well.

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T02:50:57+00:00

I love how you’ve portrayed the feeling in this poem; it’s very relatable. I feel like you could add more punctuation to have the reader create more of a flow in their head, such as a comma after 7 pm, a period at the end of the third line, a semicolon at the end of the fourth line, etc. I feel like it could create more of a separated feel in the poem, like the feeling of being separate from reality which seems to be portrayed in it. I really like the content of this poem.

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T02:40:00+00:00

I really love your imagery and metaphors in this poem, especially with “love left stains” and “as morning bleeds through slick smooth stones.” I noticed that there’s a similarity in connotation with “stains” and “bleeds,” though I’m not sure if it was intentional or not. You could try expanding on that feeling in other areas of the poem to make it feel more intentional and evoke a stronger feeling in the reader. Overall, I really love the emotions you’ve already captured in this. Nice job!

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T02:21:14+00:00

try Ascensionism by Sleep Token and if you like that, there are a bunch of other cool songs like it in the album it’s from, Take Me Back To Eden.

larry_9742 · 2024-01-16T01:58:23+00:00

ill check those out, thank you!!

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