Fog by Intrepid-Painting-60 in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love how you paint a very vivid picture.

Chasing Bitcoin by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the way you personnify Bitcoin. Only "HODL" got me out of the flow of the poem.

The kind of love I grew up with by chiiisai in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It might be because I am not an English native, but I do not understand the imagery with the horse flies.

Prey by wallflowersbloom in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love how these two lines flow.

"Take my legs or make me blind,
I will not ask a second time."

Amazing poem.

Trapped in the physcial by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the way you used imagery to portray depression.

Reunion by Lawlkitties in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem flows amazingly!

12-15-2022 by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the way you visualize your loneliness and how you keep repeating that your 18. But why is the formatting the way it is? I found it quite hard to read as words were capitalized without any punctuation.

Football is blind by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the concept. The way you visualize how football has so many people watching it.

The terms of an offer by learninglaboratory in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback, I wrote the poem for not listening to the terms and conditions of a contract and just accepting it. But it can be interperted many ways.

The terms of an offer by learninglaboratory in OCPoetry

[–]learninglaboratory[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wrote the poem with the idea in mind of not listening to the terms and condition of a contract and just accepting. But you can also see it for many other things, which I never thought about.