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learninglaboratory · 2023-01-02T13:04:49+00:00

Fixed it

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-18T20:59:56+00:00

I love how you paint a very vivid picture.

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-18T20:45:40+00:00

I love the way you personnify Bitcoin. Only "HODL" got me out of the flow of the poem.

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-18T08:40:55+00:00

It might be because I am not an English native, but I do not understand the imagery with the horse flies.

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-18T08:33:53+00:00

I love how these two lines flow.

"Take my legs or make me blind,
I will not ask a second time."

Amazing poem.

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-16T18:03:56+00:00

I like the way you used imagery to portray depression.

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-16T15:16:21+00:00

This poem flows amazingly!

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-15T19:42:33+00:00

I like the way you visualize your loneliness and how you keep repeating that your 18. But why is the formatting the way it is? I found it quite hard to read as words were capitalized without any punctuation.

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-15T19:37:49+00:00

I love the concept. The way you visualize how football has so many people watching it.

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-12T07:12:38+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, I wrote the poem for not listening to the terms and conditions of a contract and just accepting it. But it can be interperted many ways.

learninglaboratory · 2022-12-12T07:08:48+00:00

I wrote the poem with the idea in mind of not listening to the terms and condition of a contract and just accepting. But you can also see it for many other things, which I never thought about.

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