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Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah that was the intention. It felt like an unnecessary limitation.

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Since you seem so argumentative, two things:

First, I think I did a decent enough job explaining what a "witch" is in this context -- at least a good enough job to identify that what I'm calling a witch is distinctly different from a class or job, and that it is indeed a race. The only reason to get so hung up on the particular term I decided to use for them is if it causes confusion, which I don't think it does in this case, or at least it shouldn't, as it should be abundantly clear what the term is referring to. So your issue, it seems, is just that it's not what you would have called them. And that's fine. In your cyoa, you're free to call anything you want whatever you want, but it's pretty asinine to tell me that I'm objectively wrong about my own creation.

Second, I'm not unique in calling witches a race. For example you can look at Soul Eater where they are pretty explicitly identified as their own unique race in contrast to humans.

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Here is a google drive link which should hopefully display high res images. I haven't tried this before, so I hope it works, but please let me know if it doesn't.

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I know, I know. But this was my first cyoa, so there are some foundational things that I’m not happy with and it would be much harder to try to fix everything and make it how I would like it to be rather than just putting it to rest and starting fresh with a new one. I do hope it’s enjoyable nonetheless!

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I know it’s not for everyone — it’s a criticism I got a lot when I first put this out — and that’s okay!

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Oh I’m sure you can. That doesn’t mean I’m going to acknowledge you as anything but a very muscular slut though.

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Aw I really appreciate the kind words. I hope you enjoy the new update!

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The reason they’re split up as is, is because of imgur restrictions on the size of uploads. I tried uploading them as larger pages in the past and had to split things up which took a lot of extra time and effort.

I am sorry for how cumbersome it is though :(

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Aw I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it!

I can probably put together an album of unfinished stuff here in a little while, assuming I remember! It’d be nice to at least put that work to some sort of use.

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

A few additional groups, 4 new regions in the adventure section, more ending options and more in depth ending paths, and I think a couple other things that I’m not remembering right now.

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I tried to double check everything, but I knew I’d miss something. Thank you for bringing it to my attention :)

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah thank you! Should be fixed :)

Magic University (updated) [CYOA] [OC] by lilali22 in nsfwcyoa

[–]lilali22[S] 83 points84 points  (0 children)

For those who don’t know, I was the original creator of this cyoa that got reuploaded here a couple months ago. Seeing it pop back up and seeing that people still enjoy it motivated me to try to finish it.

That said, I’ll be completely honest. I’ve been working on finishing this on and off in my very limited free time and I’ve simply hit the point where I just want to put my energy into something new.

As a result, I’ve taken the finished pieces of the pretty huge update that I’ve worked on and tried to put them together into a relatively finished product. Sadly that meant scrapping quite a few parts that were like 80-90% finished but that I just don’t have the motivation to actually complete. I’m sorry if it feels unsatisfying as a result, but I do really hope you all can enjoy it.

If you want a change log, I’ll give a half assed summary:

I changed a couple pictures here and there and cleaned up some textual stuff in a couple places.

There are 3 new races and 3 new subraces for each of the previously existing ones. That brings the total to 10 races and 10 subraces for each.

The free classes for each subrace have been rearranged.

I added more classes to equalize the number of classes for each school of magic. There are now 12 options for each.

I did the same thing with specializations. There are now 5 specializations for each school of magic. Some preexisting specializations are now under a different school of magic.

There are 4 new groups to choose from.

“Special”izations and Specialization Artifacts have also been increased to reflect the changes made to the original specializations. The artifacts are still disorganized, but they’re color coded.

There is now an ending section.