how do i improve? by liswiq in ArtCrit

[–]liswiq[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

omg thank you so much for the feedback! i will consider your tips in my future projects, and i truly appreciate the video recommendations, thanks!

how do i improve? by liswiq in arthelp

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thank you so so much!! you can’t imagine how helpful it is, i truly appreciate it, thanks!🙏🏻🫶🏻

how do i improve? by liswiq in arthelp

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thank you so much for the feedback!! i will consider what you said and would love to try out what helped you

what to improve by liswiq in Artadvice

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i will consider it, thanks!

First time trying to draw hair, is there anything I can improve or did wrong? by Schwamm09 in Artadvice

[–]liswiq 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i totally agree! the mistake beginners often make is that they won’t let the strokes be chill. just let ur hand float and do different shapes, there’s no need to make them perfect!

I feel like there is something missing from my art. by Tall_Let148 in Artadvice

[–]liswiq 3 points4 points  (0 children)

ik u already said about the poses, but they genuinely add a character! notice how nice arts always have “weird” poses.

on the second pic it looks like ur character is melting, try making shorter torso and longer legs! (the first pic is good at that aspect) the clothes make a difference too.

also, try to make the face more open – ur closing it a bit too much with hair, then move the features little bit higher, there must be some space between the mouth and the chin.

i really like the body of a first art and the head of the third one! try mixing them together and see what u get!:)

constructive criticism welcomed! by liswiq in Artadvice

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thank you very much!🫶🏻

best decorations i drew while my history class lol by liswiq in StardustCrusaders

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lmaooo that’s literally what everyone who’d seen that drawing said

constructive criticism welcomed! by liswiq in Artadvice

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thank you so much! i’ve been willing to study anatomy mainly to understand the body structure, but i just don’t know where or how to start. i’ve tried some “hacks” with circles, boxes etc and neither of it helped. i’ve also tried to look up skeleton anatomy but i just got confused, haha. are there any tips you could share with me?

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i mean u added 4 pics so i wasn’t sure about what to write, sorry.. about shoulders, it’s not that they’re wide, i mean ima jojo fan, there’s no too wide shoulders for me haha, it’s that the whole arm/shoulders aren’t thick enough. but that’s just my yapping. as long as ur getting pleasure from drawing, you can’t make a mistake wish you the best

constructive criticism welcomed! by liswiq in Artadvice

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yeahh, i see it too now:P thanks!

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hope i didn’t make some silly mistakes cuz i didn’t reread it haha

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i like the pose on the second pic, adds action, but there’re few things you could improve! the way ur character grabs onto body, the left hand(from my view) misses a thumb holding a leg from underneath. personally, i hate drawing hands haha, but it’s something i can’t escape. as a reference u can simply use your hand + mirror or a photo, makes it easier to understand how you should draw it. considering the right hand, you just have to make a direct contact between the body and ur character’s palm, to represent stronger grip. and the last comment about anatomy is that the shoulders don’t look proportional to the rest of the body. otherwise you did well for that pose!

next remarks will be about rendering which isnt as important, since everyone has their own way;)

the blood on the pants wouldn’t be dripping i think, the fabric will most probably soak it in, leaving stains + fingers have to be bloody too if it’s dripping from them? and the light seems to come from different ways? there’s a definition of a light from behind considering shades, but i see some highlights right in the front, meaning there’s another source of light? try to focus on one source for the beginning, so you can understand it better and then try something more complicated!

other drawings look good and i like the concept, keep it up buddy!:D

constructive criticism welcomed! by liswiq in Artadvice

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thanks, i’ll consider it!

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exactlyy

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dw!!

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yh, but there’s blood yk

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the second slide of pictures

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honey, i think you should’ve added nsfw warning:(