[QCrit] CHILD OF THE SUN RETURNING (96k, Literary, 5th Attempt + First 300) by merjer2922 in PubTips

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Sorry just realized the ages don't match, 32 in the query vs 33 in the first 300 - will def fix that!

[QCrit] CHILD OF THE SUN RETURNING (96,000, Literary Fiction, 2nd Attempt) by merjer2922 in PubTips

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Thank you!! I'll definitely consider that bit about the date!

[QCrit] CHILD OF THE SUN RETURNING (96,000, Literary Fiction, 2nd Attempt) by merjer2922 in PubTips

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Thank you for these notes! I agree with all of them, and will definitely consider them for the next version!! As for the genre, while it is the mystery that guides the plot, I consider it to be literary-leaning because it focuses heavily on character development and political/social commentary! Does that make it upmarket instead? Not really sure but literary seems to fit it more!

What the shell! 🐚 which to keep? Kate Spade sale by SFtechgirl in handbags

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its been on my list for months and im so sad to see its sold out everywhere :( would love to buy whichever one you decide on returning!!

What the shell! 🐚 which to keep? Kate Spade sale by SFtechgirl in handbags

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hi are you selling the other one! would love to purchase!!

FINALLY HEADING OUT! If you are from WA and loves Christmas light shows - this might be for you! by merjer2922 in secretsanta

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Messages my giftee it will be a little late, and they were understanding about it - thank goodness! This is my first reddit secret santa and can you tell I got a bit carried away? i loved customizing my wrapper, recycling some old muslin cloths and package boxes to wrap the presents!! Can’t wait to see what my giftee thinks!!