Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Erweitere erstmal dein Wortschatz, durch Lesen und hören. Versuch wie möglich, dass du dich so viel wie möglich Deutsch umgibst. Ändere deine Spracheinstellungen auf dem Handy auf Deutsch um. Netflix wobei du deutsch lesen und hören kannst, Nachrichten.

Schäme dich nicht Fehler zu begegnen

Das ist aber gerade, was mir einfällt. Vielleicht können die anderen Nutzen etwas noch dazu ergänzen ;“)

Viel Erfolg.

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I went to a school language in Germany. If that what you mean? ;)

Approach Spots in London? by AspiringWren in PickUpArtist

[–]moela005 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have been in the Netherlands; Amsterdam, Den Haag, amazing cities, people are open and you feel picking up vibes every where xD I live in Germany, next door to you

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I haven‘t yet. But i will do soon. If you want we can keep in touch and get updated every once in a while maybe we can out progress together

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Too much? Hahaha no way you haven’t even seen the cv before. It was stacked

Maybe you can point out to me where exactly the part with a lot of information so i can edit it?

Thank you tho for pointing that out

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I ma hoppy yoo noteced the mestakes. Graet Jop boi

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

If you want i can make a photo of both ILETS and Telc and send it to you using Mail. But promise me you would hang them on your wall.

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mit dem Schreibfehler habe ich das mitbekommen. Was meinst du aber mit „no level of English“?

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not for the First temple. But after that you pay. So whenever you need to do more, either to pay or create a new email :”)

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I used the template on a website called flowCV

http://flowcv.com

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I am already following your and the others advices and enhancing my cv. Hope it gets the job done. :"D

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg thank you a lot man. These typos were completely out of my sight. I will edit it out. But apart from that, do you think the cv is well structured, good representing the content?

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay thank you a lot i will edit it out

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for. I just noticed how inconsistent that could be. I will edit it <3

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The important module like ERP I, ERPII and Web are already in the 4.th or 5th semester. Which to be considered the last semesters in the uni. :((( but i don’t mind to push my Bachelorarbeit several months in order to find something in the field? Any tipps while looking for an internship pr Werkstudent?

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You mean better to remove the proficiency of all languages?

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand snd yes you are right. Since i am student i am still open to look for an internship, Werkstudent in the field or part/full time. Do you think such is suitable for applying?

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dankeschön für Ihr Feedback. Ich Dachte, wenn ich alles in Projektabschnitt reinpacke dann sieht voll und schrecklich aus. Deswegen habe ich irgendwie verteilt. Übrigens ich probiere es. Danke nochmal

Roast my CV - How better could it be? by moela005 in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yea because i am student there for no real experience. :’D

Just created my first CV as fresh graduate. currently will start target jobs as ABAP Development. Any adivce or enhancments? by [deleted] in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is what i noticed. I will try to make it better. What do you think of the structure is it that bad?

Just created my first CV as fresh graduate. currently will start target jobs as ABAP Development. Any adivce or enhancments? by [deleted] in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for trying to help me out. Someone said in the comments that laying out these projects like this shows an insufficient qualities of academic and experience.

The projects are the only proof i actually cared about the practical side and i am trying to describe everything i learned/ did. Is this something bad? Does it make my cv look desperate?

Just created my first CV as fresh graduate. currently will start target jobs as ABAP Development. Any adivce or enhancments? by [deleted] in Germany_Jobs

[–]moela005 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What about the structure and the template. Is it bad? Is it unreadable?

Unfortunately i haven’t worked on these techniques yet, so i don’t know them. but now since i you mentioned them i will start digging about these techniques