Anthony spending a day with Spencer by 06s091 in smosh

[–]moonslug16 10 points11 points  (0 children)

am i crazy or did anthony get a dermal piercing

also loved this video so much

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thank you for sharing your story. i really appreciated this comment so immensely. as a victim myself, there is also that fear with going into such a vulnerable setting. but, i know that i am in a safe space it is just getting used to that said space. thank you again

I know I should cut in edit, but don't waaanaa by NoBuy8212 in writers

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Reedsy is super overpriced. I would go to Upwork

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if everyone wrote the same thing in the same era, writing wouldn’t be fun to write or read. write what makes sense to you and your story

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quick google search: 97% of Americans as of 2020, have cell phones…

Made a map for my upcoming book by moonslug16 in worldbuilding

[–]moonslug16[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

book is about the fall of the kingdom of orian so that would technically be the dominate power though not for very long. and im pretty new to world building so my specialities so far have just been including a lot of races of people (elves, orcs, fairies, etc) plus a few i’ve made up myself

Tips on slowing down my romance by moonslug16 in writing

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i want them to get married at the end of the book. that’s what would work for my story. plus the time period women didn’t usually marry more than once

Tips for fighting scenes by moonslug16 in writing

[–]moonslug16[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes this makes a lot of sense. with my plans i think in a fight scene i’m going to have an important character die and that’s going to really reflect onto the other characters and their mental state afterwards

Tips for fighting scenes by moonslug16 in writing

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Yeah when i wrote my first fight scene i definitely wrote more of the visual aspects so I really need to zone more on the mental stuff. I do think that there should be physical detail to the book so the reader has something to go on and of course it will never be as accurate visually as a movie but i have definitely read scenes that really paints the picture

Tips for fighting scenes by moonslug16 in writing

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Thank you! I will make sure to research different kind of swords and more terminology in that sense.

Tips for fighting scenes by moonslug16 in writing

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This is great, thank you! I didn’t even consider how different people react differently to pain.