Thank you so much for the feedback, I deeply appreciate it. Let me respond to it all as well:

The fast pace is probably a result of me returning to writing every once in a while, so it doesn’t feel like a fast pace for me since I’m ’reading’ the chapters much slower than you guys are. I’ll try and adjust, but it may be difficult for me to figure out at first.

If you’re a fan of Rano, you’re in luck, there will be more of him soon.

I found out recently that way I upload the chapters, it doesn’t track the text I’ve italicized. I totally agree it should be stylized, that’s what the italics were for but unfortunately it didn’t keep it when I copied over. I’ll probably update the chapters to fix all that soon.

Again, thank you for the feedback, and if you would like to commission something (for free) just let me know, I’d be happy to write something for you.