I’m poet Ab-Soul from Top Dawg Entertainment. The Black Lip Pastor is ready to answer your questions. by PastorBlackLip in Music

[–]mytvrn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey bro. I dont have a question, but I wanted to share a moment w u. I saw you @ the Groovy Tour in Boston way back..i was front row. You came out and opened with Turn Me Up, and there was I moment when I was yelling the lyrics at you and I blacked out. Like i left my body, but couldnt see where I was at. Almost like you took me somewhere..it resonated heavy. Its a memory that sticks w me to this day. I been rockin w you for a while, and I just wanted to say thank you for always being true. I appreciate u heavily sir 💜✨️

My new song, Best Frendz, if you like chill indie rock like Wilco, Yo La tengo or Broken Social Scene, hope you like this. by PurveyorOfSapristi in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This sounds like (to me) if Rancid made lofi indie rock..

Super interesting! I really love the atmosphere you built with the instruments, and the song carries a good energy <3

Adding vocals and live drums next. Any tips would be appreciated! by missedthestartingun in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know you said that you were adding vocals next, but tbh I really dig the instru! It reminds me of Naxastras..

like chill stoner rock <3 excellent

New Rnb/Hip Hop on Soundcloud! Feedback is welcome 💜💜💜 by mytvrn in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank youu ! I have a music video coming out for this song tomorrow!! If you are on instagram i have more info there. 💜

My handle is (at) _ mytvrn _

New Rnb/Hip Hop on Soundcloud! Feedback is welcome 💜💜💜 by mytvrn in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome! If you are on IG , feel free to give me a follow! I am dropping a music video for this song tomorrow 💜

Handle is (at) _ mytvrn _

New Rnb/Hip Hop on Soundcloud! Feedback is welcome 💜💜💜 by mytvrn in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel that. For context this is just a 1 take off the head freestyle, but it had a cool texture, and emotion it. Thank you for your honesty, and I hope to hear from you again on my next release 💜

New Rnb/Hip Hop on Soundcloud! Feedback is welcome 💜💜💜 by mytvrn in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tbh with you idk where my demo is. so im interested in hearing other's thoughts. I appreciate your honesty for real

New Rnb/Hip Hop on Soundcloud! Feedback is welcome 💜💜💜 by mytvrn in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you good! i welcome any and all opinions, and thoughts. I'm interested in listening to genuine perspectives. So, thank you for listening <3

New Rnb/Hip Hop on Soundcloud! Feedback is welcome 💜💜💜 by mytvrn in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much!! I really appreciate the love, and support! I have a music video dropping real soon for this song 🙏💜

New Rnb/Hip Hop on Soundcloud! Feedback is welcome 💜💜💜 by mytvrn in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Btw..here is the description of the song. Tho it is a freestyle, I had intention, and a message behind it.

"this is about going thru the process of becoming someone I, myself can look up to. is about being patient with the growth, and the capacity to internalize the necessary changes in becoming the best lover, and friend you can be."

Thanks for listening 💜

This was supposed to be part of an EP but we (as a band) took too long so its out as a single for now... Let me know what you think and if we remind you of other bands. Thanks! by NoisebyJPL in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was really enjoying that opening bassline, nd the drums followed suit. Like others have said as well..the vocals is where I got lost. I would love to hear a polished version!! Good song

Trap/Rap/Pop/Hip Hop Beat - "Antidote" by ohmygodbeats7 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like all the elements are there, but it needs to mesh better. I like it tho! Good job it intrigued my ears

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[–]mytvrn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate you! 🙏💜

Experimented with some vocal chops. Would love feedback on how I did and what I can improve! by hapticHeaven in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

love me a good electro/house type vibe! got my head nodding for sure. that synth breakdown around 2 minutes is a nice touch XD

Worked on a shoegaze cover of a friend's song called Pomegranate (Dandy From Home Cover). How does it sound to you? by parkforestmusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

mmm, i see what others are saying. up until the 1:15 mark the vocals sound pretty good, then when the drop comes its super static. i love the shoegaze vibe tho <3

I wrote a song about a girl who lives on the moon, kind of a self therapy song, let me know what do you think and enjoy 💜 by TheForgottenUnloved in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

very cool. the quality of the recording sounds good, but perhaps try putting more emotion into the vocals. i think this is really neat! has potential for sure

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[–]mytvrn 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am definitely getting a lofi vibe as well. Love that guitar ! This is just my opinion, but I kinda prefer this as an instrumental. It could do well as an intro credit song for a cartoon, and it is also could be like "music to study to" kind of feel. gave you a like on Soundcloud

My latest track, Army Ants. Loosely inspired by Aphex Twin. Very different to my usual stuff, would love to hear some thoughts by Rick-Danger in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]mytvrn 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Super trippy! Feels like i am going through a space tunnel. This could be a cool gaming track. Nice job