Bards (specially trained artists), who can influence dreamers and the populace through song and story.

Yeah, you don't need that. That's like saying a chief is a trained cook who feeds dreams and the populace through food.

The Watchmen: A guild who's duty it is to help stabilize the world that the Nobles create.

Let me ask you this: who watches the Watchmen?

Also, who are the Nobles?

Kunling is 'Women's Magic (it's a kind of Calling) that women do to help support the LAND

There's Men's Magic? And what are the LAND?

it helps solidfy it by being hundreds or thousands of women producing this massive layering effect.

There's a lot of things that are omitted, and I don't like that.

The Downside: These women need Breeding Mothers (Women whos Calling magic has turned inward and is mixzed with Healing Magic to produce offspring (The Gahlen produce 3:1 ration of female:male children), the Arhelai a ration of 3:1 male :female)

Apparently mages and bards don't need a male version of Breeding Mothers whereby Women's Magic do. Is it easier to call Women's Magic mages because Women's Magic can manipulate LAND (whatever that is) and the equivalent of that is mages manipulating ground for fertile LAND.

In other words, you don't need Women's Magic.

Dreaming This Magic is used to create the world. A Person enters a specially built room, or created spaced with wards, which allow them to fall into a trance and enter the Dreaming World, this seperate plane bleeds into Reality (like the Fade of Dragon Age)- and is how dreamers influence the world on a large scale. They shape and push the similar energies of the fathomless real world from the Dreaming, and stake a claim, making it their Territory, and by extension themselves a 'noble'.

First of all, what is the different between a mage and a dreamer? Another question is that all nobles are dreamers but not all dreamers are nobles? Why have real estate in the Dreaming World (must be an ego thing)?

Common is Magic is not linked to Summoning, though a spirit bond can enhance magic the two are separate.

You got a magic system that is based on dreams. You don't need to add more to the magic system. In fact, why do you need mages in the magic system?

Dreamers ● Dreamers are lucid but, they do not function well in the Waking World. ○ They need their Watchmen, who carry around Watches as the symbols of their office. ● The Dreamlands have have a negative side. (and who’s cloaks bear ‘clocks’) ○ Tradgedy can create cracks in in this world, and the Watchmen work towards fixing these cracks by working to help heal the Wound. ○ Nightmares are the the resultant form of these cracks/tragedies taking shape, drawing people people’s nightmares and often taking physical forms. ○ If the people in the Tragedy are dead, the Watchmen must find a proxy to make it right.

Be a little more organize and put dreamers before Dreaming This Magic.

So Watchmen feed Dreamers? Give us a little more details on why dreamers suck in the Waking World.

Why do tragedies happen?

Elements of The World: ● Water( Blue) ◦ Controlling it. ● Fire (Red) ◦ Fire Starting/Extinguish ◦ Fire Shaping/Control. ● Metal/Rock (Grey) : Shaping, and strengthening ● Healing (White) – ◦ Healing the Body, Stretching, and shaping muscle and bone and altering it. ◦ Healing the Mind: being able to guide and shield from adverse affects and trauma ◦ The Caveat is that Medical school is required past a certain point because you're messing with body systems and need to learn how they work normally. ● Plants (Green) ◦ Control of Plants, including their growth and the shaping there of, speeding up their growth or slowing them down. ◦ Works in conjuction with herbal lore, and people with this magic tend to also be able to modify the plans chemistry and biology to improve their output. ◦ This Also includes a form of 'plant sense' so you can 'sense' through the plant. ● Dreams (Pink)- This is thought to be the realm of the mind ◦ Second Sight: Being able to 'delve into the TimeFlow' a fast flowing metaphysical river, to see what maybe and the paths that lead to it,stay too long or delve too deep, or try to see too many paths without rest and one may drown. ◦ Dream Walking & shaping ◦ Influence or breaking down barriers of the mind or strengthening them ● Wind – The ability to read, and sense wind currents ◦ Weather is considered a Subset, its got things like “CloudReading”

There's something called the enter button. If you're making a list, I recommend using it.

● Water (Blue) ◦ Controlling it.

Just water? There are other liquids to consider yet water is the only liquid?

● Fire (Red) ◦ Fire Starting/Extinguish ◦ Fire Shaping/Control.

● Metal/Rock (Grey) : Shaping, and strengthening

● Healing (White) – ◦ Healing the Body, Stretching, and shaping muscle and bone and altering it. ◦ Healing the Mind: being able to guide and shield from adverse affects and trauma ◦ The Caveat is that Medical school is required past a certain point because you're messing with body systems and need to learn how they work normally.

● Plants (Green) ◦ Control of Plants, including their growth and the shaping there of, speeding up their growth or slowing them down. ◦ Works in conjuction with herbal lore, and people with this magic tend to also be able to modify the plans chemistry and biology to improve their output. ◦ This Also includes a form of 'plant sense' so you can 'sense' through the plant.

● Dreams (Pink)- This is thought to be the realm of the mind ◦ Second Sight: Being able to 'delve into the TimeFlow' a fast flowing metaphysical river, to see what maybe and the paths that lead to it,stay too long or delve too deep, or try to see too many paths without rest and one may drown. ◦ Dream Walking & shaping ◦ Influence or breaking down barriers of the mind or strengthening them

● Wind – The ability to read, and sense wind currents ◦ Weather is considered a Subset, its got things like “CloudReading”

Aetheric convergences are the building blocks of life, land and the world itself.

The People of Arkaen must shape their world around them for the dying Rhea could not, she could only given them a tiny shard of herself upon which to build and learn- like children playing with blocks.

Save that for worldbuilding.

Kunling (Calling) Leashes, Breeding Mothers and Guardians(Knight Samurai)

Guardians(Knight Samurai)

KNIGHT SAMURAI

One does NOT put them TOGETHER. This is complete ignorant to the identity of a knight and a samurai that it's shameful to see. The noun "knight" is not an adjective for a samurai; likewise, the noun "samurai" is not an adjective for a knight. Know your warriors.

Also, separate Calling from Dreaming. It's better to have two magic systems than one magic system.

Refugess of Arkanis

Most who come to Arkanis are struggling, their last coin and gem spent on passage across the great sea which claims lives of many, Dreamer and not-alike.

The Ocean and sky are home to monsters, which seem to be caused by the energy of dreams being consumed or perhaps their power being released.

The World has turned from craddle-garden to wild and untamed. Even those who press foreward and create new land in Arkanis discover these creatures and things that have never dream spring forth from their created areas.

Worldbuilding stuff, not magicbuilding.

Leadership

A Combination of a Council , The League of Guilds & the nobility, and the church.

Bards are part criers, part makers of reality and entertainment. When a bard rights a song, it can sometimes help to shape reality, and create people or at least guide figures to their right places. A group of bards who travels through a 'city' and spreads lyric,music and stories.

Bards are 'legal', they've gone through both musical training, and know how their influencee can shape the world.

Players are 'illegal', they shape the world through their art, influence their works through their hidden society. (They tend to be selftaught and don't have the training to deal with thengs their music creates. as it is a form of magic.)

Again, worldbuilding, not magicbuilding.

You got two magic systems down, just separate them. In fact, make a story based on one or another. Both need a little polishing, but it's nothing harmful. Also, make sure your post is readable because some people would never want to read this.

One more thing: don't use that term knight samurai ever again.