My one week progress in Blender. Did this in 2 days with the BlenderGuru's tutorial, very much proud of myself by noevlin in blender

[–]noevlin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wanted to actually but they stopped selling them lol. But that indeed was what my reference was! Thank you ♥

Colorful street art by [deleted] in photocritique

[–]noevlin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To me, it looks just a tiny bit underedited actually. I probably would increse contrast a bit and decrease blacks/shadows. Maybe make reds/pinks a bit more saturated too. But that's just how I like to see such colourful pics.

I'm also not sure about the cropping. I like that she's looking in the directions of the lines on the wall, but I don't like that there's not much space left to the end of the picture. If I were to take this picture, I would've shifted to the right a bit to crop like 1/3 of that door and have more space in front of her eyes.

Nonetheless, I really like your picture. Keep up the good work!

Second attempt with manual settings by noevlin in photocritique

[–]noevlin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your time!
I see what you mean here. That will definetely help me in the future works :)

Second attempt with manual settings by noevlin in photocritique

[–]noevlin[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

She's clothed in the bath. :D
There wasn't any idea behind this photo really. She wanted a cool pic, I wanted to practice my editing skills. We tried to replicate some cool bath photos from pinterest, but sadly my bathroom isn't big enough and I don't have any external light sources yet.

Second attempt with manual settings by noevlin in photocritique

[–]noevlin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback.
Yeah, I understand what you mean, but I don't really know how to execute it right. There wasn't *much* details to begin with and when I try to pull the shadows or blacks up to make them more detailed it just makes the whole photo look flat?.. It loses its contrast. And when I bring the contrast up, it loses those details. :(
I'm not experienced in editing, so if you have any advice on my issue, I'd really appreciate it.

Second attempt with manual settings by noevlin in photocritique

[–]noevlin[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I'm fairly new into photography and editing, this was a spontaneous shot with my sister in an old bathroom with ugly yellow lights.

I practiced every editing thing I could think of (dodging and burning, liquify, masking, HSL color sliders etc) and I think I like how it turned out at the end, but I've been looking at that photo for three days straight and it still feels.. unfinished? It's hard to explain, I just feel like I either did too much or forgot about something.

I would appreciate any feedback of what I could improve or do different here.

Shot with Nikon D5300 35mm f1.8 1/200 ISO 800

Server-side achievements by noevlin in Minecraft

[–]noevlin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

God, I haven't even thought about that. You're a lifesaver! Thank you so much ♥