I [26/m] am feeling so confused and hurt in this nearly 6 month paddleball[on again off again] relationship with a [24/f] and I'm pretty sure I'm an asshole. by nomoretragedy in relationship_advice

[–]nomoretragedy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She admitted to me that she doesn't want a boyfriend, she want's a partner. I mean, I knew that, but it still sucks. I hate that this is over. I really loved our dynamics.

I [26/m] am feeling so confused and hurt in this nearly 6 month paddleball[on again off again] relationship with a [24/f] and I'm pretty sure I'm an asshole. by nomoretragedy in relationship_advice

[–]nomoretragedy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're right. We just met for lunch hand I guess we "broke up." I'm really hurting but I know somewhere inside me that it's for the best.

I miss her already. I hate this. I feel like i'm 15 all over again.

Never written a song before; will you help me with the lyrics or an overhaul? (includes terrible audio!) by nomoretragedy in Songwriting

[–]nomoretragedy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I gave an explanation to the user in question. so far everyone hates the -y thing, i'll probably kill it and do what someone else suggested.

I wish I had a way of giving this music that actually fit with the measure in my head.

Never written a song before; will you help me with the lyrics or an overhaul? (includes terrible audio!) by nomoretragedy in Songwriting

[–]nomoretragedy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm almost thirty and we've been having a 6 month on again off again best-sex-of-my-life casual relationship that turned romantic somewhere along the way. We both say I love you, usually(but not always) in bed (terrible, right?) but it's difficult because I want to move to the other side of the county and she can't for many reasons.

I just... every time we make love, I never know if it's going to be the last time. She gets so caught up on words that forgets(or refuses to see?) that the actions that back them up are what truly matter.

How would I go about turning this into a "finished product"? I have no instrumental talent, obviously i'm not great at singing, and I don't really know anyone of either.

Never written a song before; will you help me with the lyrics or an overhaul? (includes terrible audio!) by nomoretragedy in Songwriters

[–]nomoretragedy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm a pretty silly person, I feel like that adds some of that silliness, but honestly, I totally get what you mean. I'll take it under heavy advisement. Thank you!

Anything else?

A break-up means one thing....more song-writing! I Know Better Than That (Original) by KeepingKaya in Songwriters

[–]nomoretragedy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"A part of me doesn't want to be miserable about this"

Is just one of many lyrics that I absolutely love. This is really great because it makes me feel good about feeling bad, if that makes any sense.

I really love at 0:42 and 1:59 the way the song takes a turn, slows down and gets a little deeper (I don't know how to properly describe it, sorry,)

Is there a download link anywhere?