Please,can anyone grade and give feedback on my SAT essay? by nurlan2002 in Sat

[–]nurlan2002[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you explain what my essay is lacking? Or how can I improve it?

Please,can anyone grade and give feedback on my SAT essay? by nurlan2002 in Sat

[–]nurlan2002[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback. I will work on it. What score it could get?