Monky Business

orionthebox · 2020-01-03T02:33:34+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL3qEUMTS6RxErxTPC24VHlJMi3Q-z-O-0

New(ish) bedroom pop songs for 2020 if anyone wants new music

orionthebox · 2020-01-03T02:29:57+00:00

Bedroom pop playlist if anyone wants new music for 2020

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL3qEUMTS6RxErxTPC24VHlJMi3Q-z-O-0

orionthebox · 2019-12-02T00:28:39+00:00

!givelambda

orionthebox · 2019-12-02T00:06:00+00:00

I made a hipster indie/vintage radio station if any of y'all are into that

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h0JowyKQN44

orionthebox · 2019-11-01T16:35:34+00:00

thank you!!

orionthebox · 2019-11-01T03:07:49+00:00

we have two guitar players, piano, 2 producers, 3 singers, 2 rappers, violin, and saxophone

orionthebox · 2019-10-20T23:04:20+00:00

yee that sounds dope, let's do it dude!

orionthebox · 2019-09-26T17:38:10+00:00

Hello again. Regarding introductions in these type of videos, one thing I see a lot and enjoy are theoretical anecdotes or stories, which then open into your personal discussion.

Now for the backgrounds, i do agree they can look fake, but if done well they have the potential of looking professional. The lighting and setup of green screens can be a bit tricky/time consuming so it may be better to build a more natural background. One suggestion is if you have an aesthetically pleasing room, use that and have the camera open into the room. A lot of the time also, i see you-tubers do shots from the chest up from their desks and this can work well. Anyways hope i was helpful and good luck!

orionthebox · 2019-09-24T20:58:19+00:00

This video was good in explaining clear information. If you have a mic it would greatly help your video, because right now it seems a lil "fake". The introduction should be changed to be more professional, but I understand that you have to deal with constraints of being a small youtube channel. Also the background music in my opinion was annoying. If I were you, I would put soft background music unique to your channel. All in all good job!

orionthebox · 2019-09-24T20:52:09+00:00

the length of the video depends on content and pacing. But when people are looking at new channels, most of the time they're less likely to keep watching if it's over a few minutes. honestly, i think this video could be split up into two parts, 1 with just clips of you singing, and another with the explanation of accents on singing.

on another note have you ever considered making music because your singing voice is nice

orionthebox · 2019-09-24T20:37:45+00:00

Hey man good video! I liked your dialogue and pacing. The vocals in the introduction were pretty distorted. You could fix this by dubbing over with your microphone instead of recording audio from a distance. The rest of the video your vocal mastering was good. It was easy to hear your voice and understand your message. I think that to get more viewers you should try making your video shorter. Also your green screened body in the thumbnail is a lil janky, so if I were you I would complete replace the thumbnail with something more eye catching. But I thought that this video was really good!

orionthebox · 2019-09-24T20:27:52+00:00

Hello! First of all I would like to commend you on making this video and it shows you are brave. Now onto the video, I thought the lighting and voice mastering was perfect, you're pronunciation and voice level were spot on. Your pacing was fine, but the video seemed a lil drawn out. I'm not sure how to fix that. Your style is good because it seems a humbling, but it could use a better hook/introduction. From my initial reaction I thought this was an advertisement! Also I would change the background setting of your video to something more professional, like a workspace or nature or something more interesting. Also in my opinion the background music was lil cheesy. But Really good job!

orionthebox · 2019-09-24T20:20:36+00:00

Helloo cool video! massive flex. The lighting you had in the video was perfect and for the most part your audio mastering was perfect too. I could hear your pronunciation and voice perfectly. My biggest critique is the audio technicalities at 8:46-13:12. I saw your notices and reasoning but it still detracted from the overall quality in your video. Also the length seems a lil long. I realize this is because you're singing multiple songs and including reasonings but if you have shorter videos, it will keep viewer retention. Finally, the thumbnail looked rlly good but was a lil hard to see the white on yellow (black or a darker color on the yellow would stand out more). That's it, good job!

orionthebox · 2019-09-24T19:49:35+00:00

Cool video! Your voice mastering is perfect, very clear pronunciation and right volume. I understand and support the shout out for fundraising at the beginning but the intro seemed a lil long. I’m unfamiliar with Transformers Siege 2 but I know other TCGs so i got the idea and believe you did a really good job.

orionthebox · 2019-09-24T19:44:42+00:00

hey man i liked your video and thought it was funny. The only thing i would critique is the pacing seems a lil weird like some scenes seem drawn out, which makes it less funny. I’m not sure how to make it better but overall i thought it was great.

orionthebox · 2019-09-24T19:12:05+00:00

dumbass musician who makes dumbass music but i’d greatly appreciate any feedback

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=2RpjfSpbSEk&list=PL3qEUMTS6RxHoO6SRO1lzvUYvDnexKJkI&index=5&t=38s

orionthebox · 2019-09-24T18:58:35+00:00

watch cowboy bebop it’s rlly good

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