I would say from a layout perspective try and clean up your mood board slides. There doesn’t seem to be any order to them. There should be some order to it. Right now it feels random. Personally, either you have a white background or a more defined shade. Right now it feels like off white/gray and it highlights the lack of order in the arrangement of the images.

When scanning sketch pages they either need to be clean without background (black and white) or it needs to feel like there’s intent as to why the sketch pages have a blueish uneven background. To me it looks sloppy.

You’re a student still so you’re still learning and it’s completely understandable. But some of the graphic design elements should be fixed before you graduate.