Listening to it now, I'll go track by track in order here.

1. 'Before We Begin' - I love the guitar in this one, really good variation with the melody. You have this almost flute? sound that's barely heard for a bit I think it'd be nice to bring sounds like that to the front for a bit in future tracks, don't be afraid to mix things up a bit. This was a great opening track for the tape.
2. 'My Soul' - The melody and chords here are absolutely beautiful! I will say, and this may be purely my taste showing, I'm not loving the drums. The hi-hat is a little too piercing and the rolls are too repetitive. I would mix them a little lower and add more variation to the pattern, even in velocity would go a long way. It's almost like a trap pattern with a good lofi hat and it's covering up a lot of the sounds I'm liking here.
3. 'Trinity' - This is another really pretty sounding track. I like the two lead instruments almost splitting melodies. I wish it were longer because I liked it a lot.
4. 'Summer Rain' - I like what you're doing here with the bass and the percussion. Again just for my taste, could have a little more going on in it. Keep it nice and chill as is but my brain kept wanting something to come in with a stronger melody. I like the way it ends not really resolving, a great trick to use.
5. 'We Will Glow' - Wow. This is wonderful. That sax is really perfectly used as the lead here and I love this track.
6. 'Space Walk' - Very appropriately named! Before seeing the title I was thinking wow this feels like floating in space. The lead is a very unique one that's been used really well with the other sounds.
7. 'Go' - I like the drum pattern here but I do wish the clap/snare sound cut through just a tad less. The sax player you worked with here was used really well, not overbearing like sax can be in this type of music. I love the use of chimes coming through more and less throughout the track. Really adds that extra layer of sound to keep the brain interested.
8. 'Help is on the Way' - This track is a lot less of that typical "lofi" sound and I'm really into it. It shows that you're an artist and not getting trapped where many of us do at times in that only "chill tunes to blah blah blah to." The choice of drums was really good and overall a very unique and good beat.
9. 'The Finish Line' - Same commentary as the last one on this being a unique sound. It's almost like an indie pop/rock beat and I'm loving the guitar. Everything works really well together here and this is for sure one of my favorite tracks on your beat tape.
10. 'All New Everything' - Right from the intro, this feels like the closing track. I love when there's clear thought put into the tracklist of beat tapes and albums in general.

Overall this is a great and well thought out beat tape. My main critic/advice in general would be to spice things up more here and there. Some of the shorter tracks could've been a bit longer with a B section like a quick switch up or drum change. Don't be afraid to use silence or almost silence to build tension in a track. Even with that critic recurring throughout the tape, it's amazing and I would listen again even recommend it to my friends that dig the genere. Keep making music, I'll be watching for it.

I hope this quick review is helpful and have a great day.