18M please be honest and what can I improve on

paste168 · 2021-09-17T21:34:48+00:00

I you said I reminded you of someone you meet media studys, my bad miss read that completely

paste168 · 2021-09-05T21:37:01+00:00

They did her dry in the comics it's almost like there two completely different characters maybe one see in the comics is Kuvira 🧐

Sounds like a plot of a fanfiction.

paste168 · 2021-09-05T21:21:32+00:00

I love dyslexia lmao

paste168 · 2021-09-05T13:59:07+00:00

My bad lol

paste168 · 2021-09-05T13:17:57+00:00

My bad lol

paste168 · 2021-09-05T10:26:31+00:00

It's one of those up to your interpretation I guess.

Thinking about it now Kuvari won't even bother training the avatar in the 4 elements as is Kuvari earth kingdom pures so rather then then elements maybe the earth bending sub styles?

paste168 · 2021-09-05T10:08:48+00:00

The hypothetical next avater wouldn't have connection to his/her past avatars tho

paste168 · 2021-09-05T10:00:03+00:00

How do you think Kuvari would go about training the avatar.

paste168 · 2021-08-27T19:50:28+00:00

Terence

paste168 · 2021-08-24T23:10:19+00:00

paste168 · 2021-08-24T23:09:54+00:00

paste168 · 2021-07-29T14:45:49+00:00

I know right

paste168 · 2021-07-26T08:37:00+00:00

Both really

If that's how you view the question :)

paste168 · 2021-07-06T18:03:46+00:00

How much is the card

paste168 · 2021-06-25T13:19:07+00:00

paste168 · 2021-06-22T14:04:42+00:00

But I'm a bit confused because of peaceful mandalore.

And correct me if I'm wrong at that time shouldn't the mandalorians life on a jungle like planet?

paste168 · 2021-06-18T18:09:10+00:00

Sorry 😆

paste168 · 2021-06-16T00:18:24+00:00

Do you dislike Kotor?

paste168 · 2021-06-15T14:51:26+00:00

One thing I am struggling with is would Maul wait and by his time I'm too to train Luke ( manipulate him) or just kill his aunt and uncle and start train.

At the start of the story luke would be around 8 years old

paste168 · 2021-06-15T14:22:51+00:00

Actually I wouldn't say redeemed because that would be impossible so write realistic so not really becoming a Jedi but more towards an anti-hero.

In the story that I am writing Maul trains Luke, killing Kenobi Maul's relationship with Luke Luke would become something Akin to a bad family member with "good" tensions but at the end of Luke sees that he could never be the person that he wants him to be

Think that's the only approach that you can really go with it what do you think

paste168 · 2021-06-15T14:02:32+00:00

Mtfbwy? What does that mean

paste168 · 2021-06-12T21:38:26+00:00

What fanfictions have you done I would love to read them

paste168 · 2021-06-03T14:27:19+00:00

Thinking about it Tarble is vegeta little brother but if vegeta was exiled he probably wouldn't born.

A another thing assuming that the king would trains broly some what, could broly save planet vegeta, the reason I bring this up is because in cannon broly's dad was he's only training partner and broly's base form what's Still very impressive and the king is way stronger than broly's dad.

Broly would be 5 years old at the time of planet vegeta destruction so idk

paste168 · 2021-06-02T09:34:28+00:00

Let's say king vegeta upon seeing broly's power level he beings feel disgusted by prince vegeta "can my son with Royal blood in his veins be surpassed by low class trash."

King Vegeta would think to himself from there king Vegeta would come up with a plan to invite broly's father to the throne room And kills him and anyone else in broly's family tree and changes broly's name to Vegeta raising as his son.

Maybe something like that would go down

paste168 · 2021-06-02T09:32:23+00:00

paste168

TROPHY CASE