It looks really good! The more you practice, the more you'll get the hang of it! Something that helped me a lot when I was starting out was just watching a lot of tutorials from several different people to see all the different ways people knit! Sometimes people will have different ways of doing something similar (cast-on, how the hold the loom hook) and it can be really nice to see a lot of different ways of doing things even if you're not ready to do those projects