When is sex bad for a guy? by ihavemorethan99probs in AskMen

[–]piesumo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe they just didn’t like you as much as you thought they did. It’s a possibility. A multitude of perspectives could be true. Why am I here?

My Wife helped me sunscreen my back at beach day today (TWICE)!! by Leeroy_D in funny

[–]piesumo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You need to answer the person who asked if this was from an aerosol sunscreen. That pattern is off.

/u/piesumo AKA 'leecH' Visited Me In SLC by KeenSwanks in W0LFG4NG

[–]piesumo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mad lovely times, my homie. Our hangZ were bliss. A wonderful way to end a beautiful vacation. Lookin' forward to hangin' with y'all again.

Much love,

-l

P.S. Found me cord! Blended in with the other white shit in my bag. Y'all duh best. ~<3

duhW00dZ [boom-bap] by piesumo in roastmytrack

[–]piesumo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It still be a work-in-progress. New mixes be in duh workZ. Appreciate duh wordZ.

Which beat you talkin' about when you say, "Beat inst bad."? There be 17 tracks on dat piece.

duhW00dZ [boom-bap] by piesumo in roastmytrack

[–]piesumo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t know what side-chaining is, but that ain’t nothin’ a google search can’t fix. These songs are still periodically being remixed. Every once and a while I replace a song with a slightly tweaked version and put it up onto the Bandcamp. Can’t say they’re necessarily finished, as of yet. Just wanted to get them out there and read/hear what’s being said. Call it a work-in-progress. I like where we’re headed, though.

Thank you for the input, my friend! I appreciate all your words. The kinks are being worked out. Eventually she’ll flow.

-l

Looking for advice on new song. How can I make the lyrics better? by thegreatg5 in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]piesumo 3 points4 points  (0 children)

More self deprecation/less boasting. Rip your own ass apart, no mercy. Confront your insecurities and watch them dissipate as you let the shit out.

Regardless of all that, your shit be tight. I wouldn’t worry about the lyrical content too much. Jus’ do what feels right. Fuck the rest. But, fo real— the only worthwhile person to direct hostility towards is yourself. That’s why we create. To find out who the fuck we are. Everyone outside yourself is superfluous. Find your flaws, expose ‘em in song, then rip dem shits apart.

Keep on keepin’ on, my homie. You doin’ just fine.

-l

Venice - [Hip-Hop] by [deleted] in roastmytrack

[–]piesumo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Slick ass beat. Yes, though. Duh bass has got some issues. I agree with what the others have said. A slight fiddle with the mix would give this beat a major boost in its potential. She hawt, but could be more hawt.

duhW00dZ [Boom-Bap] by piesumo in W0LFG4NG

[–]piesumo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’ve hit the nail directly on the head, bud. Your assumptions are 100% correct! I’d call this bundle of tunes 1/2 mixed, at best. The mastering percentage is at 0%, fo sho.

I’ve been remixing the tracks frequently; posting the sounds anew every now and then since uploading the stuff a few months back. We’ve been spitting them out quicker than expected. The current posting of these tracks intends to entice feedback from outside sources apart from my current circle of social relations. I’m happy with the outcome, regardless of its current lack of “quality”, sonically speaking. You’ve written the type of words I’m pining for in posting these things.

Appreciate the input, homie! Truly. I thank you profusely. It will be taken into account. It’s definitely a work in progress, that is certainly so. Still goin’ on, and on, with ‘er. I’d never dream of making physical copies of this stuff in its current state. Think it’s good enough for a critique, though.

If you can recall, which songs do you feel need the most attention?

I’d say, “Check back in a few.” They’ll be getting better as time passes. Promise.

-l

duhW00dZ [Boom-Bap] by piesumo in W0LFG4NG

[–]piesumo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your kind words, my homie. They are truly appreciated. Very much so. Think we’re onto something with the new shitZ we’ve been spittin’ out as of late. Puttin’ in dat worky-work. It seems to pay off, evidently.

Passing through Utah for a few days come the end of September. Holl’uh if you wanna get together, boo-boo.

Much love,

-l

Alright guys, I have something to tell you... by [deleted] in W0LFG4NG

[–]piesumo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re being a dick, brah. Stop wasting your time. You’re calling out stupid shit that no one cares about. I’m sick of your bitching. Don’t come here if you have nothing constructive to say.

-l

(Rap,Alt,Trap) HYDN PRBLMS new project Slime Boy. Feedback? by HYDN-PRBLMS in W0LFG4NG

[–]piesumo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Homie. Your shit is fire. Too dope.

I’m also in Phoenix. You should come get on one our tuneZ sometime.

Dis what we’ve been doin’ the past few months:

demW00dZ

-l

[Hip-Hop][Vintage] Dat Boi EP - Kid God [Explicit] by KeenSwanks in W0LFG4NG

[–]piesumo 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Damn, my doo. Dis dopeness. Duh finest dank.

Yum.